LJ Idol Week 5: “My enemies are all too familiar. They're the ones who used to call me friend.”

[proceedcyclone]

Do you ever think of me? I’m embarrassed to admit that after all these years, I still think of you regularly. Sometimes it’s a song we used to belt out as the wind whipped through our hair while we drove through the night. Sometimes it’s a silver SUV passing me in a parking lot. Sometimes it’s two girls, one tall and one short, walking in the

Comments

[ragnarok_08]

This was very poignant, cutting really deep.

Well done!!

[static_abyss]

I felt that ending right in my stomach. This was painfully yearning and bittersweet. And so delicately told.

[kittenboo]

Very well told, the longing and pain really comes through.

[nikkiii_brown]

That ending was like a knife to the gut. If this is a true story then I'd imagine you felt it even greater. ♥

[sweeny_todd]

omg - freaking heartbreaking :(