Paper: read if you so please. But this is mainly for Tara to review cause AIM is being an ass.

[prof_mcpimp]

J.T. Uchison

Michale Erzen

Renaissance to Modern Art

5/13/09

War and the Arts:

Modern and Post-Modern

“War. War never changes. Since the dawn of human kind, when our ancestors first discovered the killing power of rock and bone, blood has been spilled in the name of everything, from God to justice to simple,

Comments

[ersatzcat]

your arguments seem solid, and the organization is fine. you have some grammatical errors scattered throughout (do you want me to specifically point them out?) and... it's not exactly eloquent but I don't know what your teacher's standards are. if you don't care about eloquence, the paper serves its purpose.