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fic: Interventions and Lullabies (4/?)

Dec 02, 2012 23:17

Title: Interventions and Lullabies (4/?)
Author: professor_spork
Beta: volando-voy
Character/Pairing: Eventual Rachel/Sam, Rachel/Quinn, Sam/Quinn, Rachel/Sam/Quinn... also other people are in this story, I promise.
Fandom: Glee
Rating: PG-13 (subject to change)
Summary: S3 AU. In a world where Shelby never comes back to town, Rachel finds herself boyfriendless and in ( Read more... )

samchel, faberry, interventions and lullabies, fic, glee or something, fabrevans, fanfic

Comments 4

smc_27 December 3 2012, 11:31:24 UTC

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I want to smush Sam okay. I honestly never gave much thought to how he'd feel when he came back and everything had changed so much. Other than the Mercedes/Shane stuff, I mean. This was a great insight into that, and you write him SO well it makes me jealous.

professor_spork December 4 2012, 04:13:38 UTC

rghearkrgjnekgjekgj THANK YOU

Pretty much the whole point of this story is "erryone wants to smush Sam," because yes. WHO WOULDN'T?

And I'll trade you my Sam for your Puck.

beingfacetious December 7 2012, 00:15:55 UTC

He opens the main doors for Kurt, who gives him a half-sympathetic, half-alarmed look. “Honey, what rock have you been living under?”
“Kentucky,” Sam grumbles as he follows Kurt inside, because he doesn’t really have a better answer. He’d never got back into the habit of checking his Facebook since he regained computer access; he hadn’t even missed it all that much. But now the idea of being totally blindsided by the things he’s missed makes him nervous.
I really like the small things you include like this, because so many people (like RYAN MURPHY) leave these details out--like, really, he didn't check Facebook? But no, okay, he really didn't. I just like that it's acknowledged.

Seems like as good a place as any to say that I absolutely love the way you've written every single character who appears. Partly it's the small details--mentioning Rachel waking up to Break My Stride, for example--but a lot of it is the realization of them as people. They speak distinctly, and have distinct movements, and I can see them all so clearly. Kurt ( ... )

hermionerd December 12 2012, 05:21:52 UTC

dulcet tones of Kurt Hummel’s screeching.
What a perfect, perfect chapter opening. It's so...Glee. But by that I mean Glee in its best moments.

Can I just point out I'm here to save glee club and Sam being a superhero in his head again because CUUUTE.

He’d thought she’d meant him. God, how could he have been so stupid?
Baaaby. Ugh, this is just so clever, too, playing on context to create a misunderstanding without even really doing anything to the wording.

Ms. Pillsbury leans forward with a kind expression despite her snarky comment, giving him her full attention.
So, so on point for Emma.

but he’s not gonna feel bad about feeling bad.
Sam really is the Steve of McKinley High, isn't he?

“You don’t seem angry to me,” Ms. Pillsbury points out. “You seem sad.”

After a moment, he hesitantly ventures, “Do I have to pick just one?”And of course it's a real question. Saaaaaaaaaaam ( ... )