Chapter the Fourth -- Finally Confrontation

[professorkatze]

Chapter: 4/?
Pairing: Peter/Edmund
Rating: Finally going up! Rated PG-13ish for seriously offensive language
Story Summary: Takes place after LWW and during Prince Caspian. Edmund tries to recapture his relationship with Peter, who refuses to acknowledge what they had as Kings. After all, how can he admit to loving someone who is a man, and his

Comments

[suborbital]

Beautiful and heartbreaking in one. Bravo.

[professorkatze]

*blush* Thank you much!

[professorkatze]

ummmm ... I already answered this but it's not popping up, so just in case ... thank you. Again. XD

[surgical_rush]

Honest and tragic and pretty and sad. I like the way you are portraying Edmund as being emotionally stronger than Peter.

x

[professorkatze]

Sankyuu! XD
yes, that's the feeling I got from the second film: that while Edmund has already learned from his mistakes, Peter's the one being all melodramatic and sooooo misunderstood *glomps Peter*
So I thought Ed would see what's really important underneath society's pressures.

[arabesqueno2]

"Did you ever love me? Or was I just the most convenient shag?"
Peter glared up at him through the disheveled mess the conversation had made of him. "Never," he snarled, and the word released a fresh wave of tears. "Not once. I never, never loved you."
Oh, god, that part made my heart wrench! If I was in Edmund's situation, I would've burst into tears at that point, even if it was a lie. But I guess having gone through life in Narnia already matured him enough to the point to know that Peter didn't mean a thing he said.

I almost wanna have the angst continue because it would be juicier than having them get together in an easy, hunky-dory way. Keep it comin' ;).
I'm also hoping for some more Shirtless!Edmund moments. RAWR.

[professorkatze]

This is what every author wishes for, to have their work quoted back to them. Thanx XD
I know! As I was writing it, I was thinking, Peter, that's so mean!! And thus I upset myself. Brilliant, that ^^U
No worries, PLENTY more angst where that came from ;P
Oh, I guess I never had him put a shirt back on. ... oops. *lecherous grin*

[eci_frog]

So much angst! You can practically feel it seeping through each and every word.
"A Peter/Edmund in England" story has so much potential for angst. It should be milked for all its worth, then finished of with a happy ending. ......There'll be a happy ending, wont it?.....please?....

[professorkatze]

*evil grin*
Not telling! *skips away*

[timour]

What a beautiful ouch

[professorkatze]

Thank you ^^