fic: A Sentimental Mind (1/4)

Feb 02, 2012 00:30

Title: A Sentimental Mind
Beta: pinkeuphoria1
Pairing: Ryu/Hayato
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst, General, Romance
Warnings: Domestic abuse, violence and homophobia.
Notes: Ryu-centric. Ahh, I’m really unsure about Ryu’s characterization in this fic .____. The approach I took with this fic made him… kind of extremely sensitive and… pretty weak? I’m not sure if I got a ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, pairing: hayato/ryu, genre: general, genre: romance, format: one-shot, genre: angst

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crazyfaucet February 2 2012, 00:37:32 UTC
I'm commenting on this post because I am so excited! You have made my week infinitely better just by posting fics! I have something to do this weekend! fajdlkfjalkd <333

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prologuesized February 2 2012, 07:18:57 UTC
Yay! My beta got determined to keep her promise of sending all three of my fics she's had for a while back to me before I get to read today's update for The Same Deep Water As You. She's got one (the oldest and worst) to go XD

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chained_akame February 2 2012, 09:38:14 UTC
Hahahaha ok for a minute I thought that Ryu was in 3-D and then he was transferred back in 1-D...I can be so silly sometimes xD
But this is extremely good. I like the approach,I like how everyone behaves around Ryu and I certainly adore the last scene^^

I think I'm gonna comment on each part differently,because this seems so awesome and I won't be able to say everything I want in the last part *runs to read the next*

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prologuesized February 2 2012, 17:34:32 UTC
Yay, I'm happy you like it ♥ And yes, the fic starts quite a bit before the series did XDD I thought I'd make some background for them.

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ashi_ga_demasu February 3 2012, 09:18:48 UTC
Oh, Ryu! Your life is difficult.
I like your Ryu. I feel him.
Gokusen 2 prequel. Hair dyeing. Yes.
This is good. Really
... )

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prologuesized February 3 2012, 09:27:25 UTC
Life is difficult. Ryu is just... exceptionally unfortunate :<

I'm glad you liked it! :DDD ♥

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ashi_ga_demasu February 3 2012, 09:35:17 UTC
I'm still in part 2. Seriously loving this
... )

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edogawa February 3 2012, 13:23:08 UTC
You know how much I love your writing style.. ah.. too much, really.

This Ryu and Hayato are wonderful, full of life and real.

Ok, moving to the next part, I just wanted to say hello and THANK YOU!

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prologuesized February 3 2012, 15:56:41 UTC
*blush* Um, thank you. It's a big compliment to receive. I'll try to deserve it in the future too!

Thank you for dropping a comment! Enjoy reading ♥

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