Fic: Sailing Among the Clouds

Jan 05, 2013 12:51

Title: Sailing Among the Clouds
Beta: pinkeuphoria1
Pairing: Shuuji/Akira, some Akira/Nobuta
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
Notes: Based on Proposal Daisakusen, although, um, this doesn't involve a wedding. This would've been my entry to this year's amigo_exchange but stuff happened. I've been a bit stressed out whether to post it or not because I wrote it while (still!) ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, pairing: shuuji/akira, genre: romance, format: one-shot

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starg8fan_liz January 6 2013, 09:27:39 UTC
Wonderful fic XDD sooo sweet at the end >__<♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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prologuesized January 6 2013, 11:04:45 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting :3 ♥

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ladyc2 January 6 2013, 11:22:38 UTC
So glad you decided to post this anyway - it's really good. Loved Shuuji's reaction to the fairy and how upset he got when he came back the second time and thought nothing had changed - good thing Nobuta got Akira to chase him down.

Thank you for sharing this :)

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prologuesized January 6 2013, 11:40:51 UTC
I think the bit I had the most fun writing was Shuuji's and the fairy's encounter in the bathroom... It just got a bit out of hands. I'm not really a comedy writer, but what can I do when I've just put two overreacting characters in the same space...

Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting ♥

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prologuesized January 7 2013, 16:15:27 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it :3 And phew about the characterisation, because I haven't written these characters much at all so I was really nervous... Thank you for commenting!

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aeris_svitkona January 7 2013, 18:16:35 UTC
Fufufufu...raped by a fairy in a bathroom, where does your imagination come from?! XD

Prodai, so nostalgic! At first, I blamed Yamapi's character for his spinelessness, but about halfway through, I blamed the girl too cuz she had to be blind AND stupid to not notice ~_~

Anyways, Shuuji saying 'Hallelujah Chance!' rofl!~ That fairy's an S, no doubt about it!

Glad you decided to post it after all! ^_^

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prologuesized January 7 2013, 18:26:05 UTC
I DON'T KNOW. IT JUST HAPPENED. The fairy was being creepy and somehow the only logical reaction Shuuji managed to have was that he was getting raped because who on earth would normally creep up on you in the bathroom and very insistently approach you even when there's not much space? XD

And yeah... I kind of agree with that. I was like "YOU IDIOOOOTS" when I watched it XD But I guess it was just humane? Not being sure of things, being scared of putting your heart out there like that, all kinds of stuff... Hmm. They were just humans. Frustrating and stubborn, but... humans.

SHUUJI'S USED TO MAKING POSES AND SAYING STUPID PHRASES. IT SUITS HIM FINE XD The fairy could get a flawless performance out of him~

Thanks for reading and commenting :3 *hug*

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aeris_svitkona January 7 2013, 20:30:26 UTC
Oh god HOW could I forget?! "Bicycle...Bye-bicycle!" >.>

That phrase stuck with me and best friend for sooo long, ppl thought we were going crazy, lol. So I take that bit back, Shuuji and poses is totally fine, dunno why he was complaining anyways! XD

And Prodai....gahhh that is just frustrating, if it were me....I'd probably end up doing exactly what the girl did, hurts to say, but not without clearing things up with Pi's character first >.< I really dislike spineless ppl, so he would've gotten a verbal trashing and then maybeeee I'd forgive him ^^

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prologuesized January 7 2013, 22:46:12 UTC
I loved the bicycle thing so much! And then of course there was Nobuta poweeeer and everything :3

Owwww. I'm incredibly empathetic and I can sort of understand why many people find it so hard (...I'm also socially somewhat handicapped) so I can't hate anyone for that XD But I get that you'd want to stick around for someone with stability and who's clear with you, otherwise it's incredibly hard and it doesn't feel worthwhile :3

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bellemelody February 27 2013, 03:20:21 UTC
This story is adorable :) I enjoyed so much reading it :)

sweet and so Nobuta like <3 I love this pairing a lot <3 creepy fairy is great XD XD XD

thank you ♥

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prologuesized February 27 2013, 08:28:55 UTC
Hihihi, I'm glad you liked it ♥ And the fairy was hilarious to write once I got into it XD

Thanks for the comment!

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