i was about to skip this fic when i first saw this posted (since what i read first was the title and i don't know any Swedish word) but then i saw that you were the author, and i was "oh, she's back..it has been so long, i have to read this now"..lets just say that i'm a fan
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Ah, I'm really glad that you read it! I'm glad to hear that you've liked my work :3 *huggle*
Wohoo, it's good that you were feeling things, that's what I was aiming for! And yeah, Kame can easily come across as an asshole in this fic, but really, it's just the damaged humanity in him and Jin is too naive and optimistic to understand much of it.
I like slipping in tiny bits of real life facts/assumptions~ They put a nice flavour into things :)
Thanks for the comment! I very much appreciate it!
hi again!! i just read the fic you did as part of HEM in tumblr..i already kind of see his side already when i was reading this one but seeing kame mustering all his resolve and finally confronting his parents and forcing them to see things his way when it comes to jin, so, so proud of him..
and to think that it had taken a lot of time alone and with jin for him to finally heal and be able to do this for himself, maybe now he can finally start healing completely, knowing that his parents are on their way to accept him and his relationship with jin..
Acceptance is a curious thing, I'm honesty not sure myself to what degree Kame's parents will ever accept their relationship, but at least it's a step forward. Things will probably at the very least become tolerable. I'm glad that you enjoyed the snippet, stay tuned for a few more if you're interested ;)
Oh you're back! And you brought a great fic with you. I loved the storyline, of Jin being a wandering soul and Kame being his paranoid neurotic self. They make an unlikely pair but also the best match for each other. I loved how the story progressed and adore your separated timelines. It keeps the reader on the edge and thinking. And may i say how I loved the part when they met again. Its fate really, what are the chances of them meeting again with Jin never staying in one place long enough and Kame barely coming out oghis shell.
And I can totally relate to Kame's dillema. Its painful really when you have to hide yourself and deny the things that make you happy. I'm glad he accepted who he is and allowed himself to have the things that make him happy.
As usual, an amazingly written fic packed with emotion and wrapped with masterful prose. You truly are one of my fave authors. thanks for sharing this.
It would be a shame if a human being would sign away happiness for good in favour of living an empty yet acceptable life. I think that everyone are denying themselves of some things, but it's important to take a moment to think if you're doing yourself a favour by denying things or if you're basically just shooting yourself in the leg. Sometimes it's better to let go (and sometimes, sadly, it isn't).
Thank you for reading and commenting! It is very much appreciated :3
so beautiful ^/////^ and yet success to make me cry *sob*
feel so sad everytime they're having fight and then break up. it's so painful to see them like that *sob sob* but I really like the propose scene ^/////^ also the scene when jin comes home and to kazuya, it is so touching, especially the words “ Jag är hemma" and “ Välkommen, min kära. ” so heartwarming and It make me cry again but this time because of happiness *sob sob sob*
I'm really glad that you enjoyed the fic and that it got you emotional (since that's one of my main goals in writing)! :D Thank you very much for taking the time to comment~ It made me glad that I didn't cut out/change the Swedish bits before posting!
This is an amazing piece of work. I'd only intended to start reading it last night, but I ended up staying up through the whole night to finish it because it was just that good. Beautiful and totally addicting. ;) First off, the three-timelines thing -- major kudos for that, because it was so well done. That's really difficult to pull off in a way that isn't confusing or self-defeating (in that either one timeline will feel like the "main" timeline and the rest like filler, or that the non-chronological structure will make it feel like the endings of various pieces are given away prematurely), and I think this might be the most successful example I can remember seeing in a fanfic. Each scene felt necessary and interesting even when we already knew certain things about where the timelines were ultimately leading. And even though I assumed from the beginning that they would find their way back to each other in the end, the journey was surprising, and there were unexpected (but never illogical) little twists and turns right up until the
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Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a lovely long comment! Receiving it made me very happy :3
Three timelines did pose a big writing challenge - I'm relieved to hear that they worked out for your taste. I did my best to keep things organic, relate things together yet still let them stand as special, memorable moments on their own.
I'm also glad to hear that you found their relationship realistic and sympathetic. It's a big compliment to receive.
Anyway, really - thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.
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Wohoo, it's good that you were feeling things, that's what I was aiming for! And yeah, Kame can easily come across as an asshole in this fic, but really, it's just the damaged humanity in him and Jin is too naive and optimistic to understand much of it.
I like slipping in tiny bits of real life facts/assumptions~ They put a nice flavour into things :)
Thanks for the comment! I very much appreciate it!
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and to think that it had taken a lot of time alone and with jin for him to finally heal and be able to do this for himself, maybe now he can finally start healing completely, knowing that his parents are on their way to accept him and his relationship with jin..
way to make a fic even more perfect that before..
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And I can totally relate to Kame's dillema. Its painful really when you have to hide yourself and deny the things that make you happy. I'm glad he accepted who he is and allowed himself to have the things that make him happy.
As usual, an amazingly written fic packed with emotion and wrapped with masterful prose. You truly are one of my fave authors. thanks for sharing this.
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Thank you for reading and commenting! It is very much appreciated :3
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feel so sad everytime they're having fight and then break up. it's so painful to see them like that *sob sob* but I really like the propose scene ^/////^ also the scene when jin comes home and to kazuya, it is so touching, especially the words “ Jag är hemma" and “ Välkommen, min kära. ” so heartwarming and It make me cry again but this time because of happiness *sob sob sob*
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Three timelines did pose a big writing challenge - I'm relieved to hear that they worked out for your taste. I did my best to keep things organic, relate things together yet still let them stand as special, memorable moments on their own.
I'm also glad to hear that you found their relationship realistic and sympathetic. It's a big compliment to receive.
Anyway, really - thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.
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