Aw, I liked the part with Ray the best in this one!! lol. I don't think I was supposed to, but it was really sweet how Ray was helping him keep calm and taking care of the food so Gee could take a shower.
The candles were a romantic touch and good solution to the power outtage!! I bet the boys looked absolutely gorgeous...mmmm
Meh, I'm really disappointed with this one. It's probably my worst piece to date. So the fact you even liked any of it is cool. I don't even know why I bothered posting, instead of re-writing it.
I liked the boys' initial nervousness and then how they loosened up after some wine. Very real! Lol. Ray's reassurances about looking after the food were cute, hehe. That last scene was just nice to imagine; matching smiles and being nsuggled up together = very very sweet, hee.
Power cuts are only fine for as long as my laptop battery lasts, haha.
Wine helps you to socialize, shame I don't like it =P I agree, once my laptop dies, I get bored. But it's nice, because when the power comes back on you appreciate it more
Thats sweet Sam, nothing wrong with it at all, I wondered where we were going with candles lol but alas it was just for lighting. won't be on much tonight but I truly love you stud muffin and wish all men were like you (except for the gay bit 'cos that would be very difficult for me, although it doesn't stop us does it? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Nah, I don't like most of my stuff, but I hate Hate Hate this one. I rushed myself on it, I want to post once a day, and so I wrote it thinking, I have to get this up or else. Not good. So I'm skipping the late night/early morning updates, and going to update as and when inspiration hits.
What's up? You sound a bit 'blah!' about men, which seems unlike you.
I hate the whole fucking bunch of them- no offense because you are a definite exception honey- they are all self centred users. blah is a good explaination of how I'm feeling I can't even be arsed writing hence the abrupt end to last fic.
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The candles were a romantic touch and good solution to the power outtage!! I bet the boys looked absolutely gorgeous...mmmm
Haha.
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-heart you back!
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Oh, and can I friend this journal? I comment on here instead of frankxgerard anyway....?
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sure, you don't need to ask =]
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mmm, i like them, you get to sit in the dark for ages and do nothing =]
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Power cuts are only fine for as long as my laptop battery lasts, haha.
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I agree, once my laptop dies, I get bored. But it's nice, because when the power comes back on you appreciate it more
Thanks for commenting!
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won't be on much tonight but I truly love you stud muffin and wish all men were like you (except for the gay bit 'cos that would be very difficult for me, although it doesn't stop us does it? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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What's up? You sound a bit 'blah!' about men, which seems unlike you.
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Don't worry, if I were you and read this, I wouldn't have commented at all. I think it's pretty obvious I hate this one =/
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