No. More. Poetry. Ever.

Apr 30, 2005 19:36

Title: No. More. Poetry. Ever.
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lillian78 May 1 2005, 01:38:54 UTC
OMG that was so sweet. I loved this line to death. He's filth. He's a canker sore on the heel of humanity. He's a cretinous mass of... was Potter flirting? Your Draco is spot on as they say (of course I just happen to agree with it *snicker*). And Harry is just the right combination of sweetness and fumbling. I could read your H/D fics all day and be very, very happy. Of course, I'd also have to have the *best* snacks to go along with the lovely fics. :-D

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charlotteschaos May 1 2005, 02:19:05 UTC
Thank you! He's very conflicted here and I was a little worried he'd come off as crazy or schizophrenic. It's hard to balance that in writing.

*blushes* I'm glad you like the H/D! I have loads of fun writing them. I feel rather obsessed at times. *grins*

What snacks would you have? mmm snacks.

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lillian78 May 1 2005, 07:37:33 UTC
I adore well written H/D fics and yours seem to push all the right buttons for me. And my favorite snack to read by? A large bag of cheese curls and a soda. Food of the Gods. ^_^

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charlotteschaos May 1 2005, 08:23:28 UTC
Aww *blushes* Thanks.

Mmmm.... those are yummy snacks. I'm kind of a corn chip and salsa gal myself. I like it spicy. *waggles brows* Or some nice popcorn. But if you let me too near your cheese curls... I'll steal them ;)

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cocohufflepuffs May 1 2005, 07:55:44 UTC
Hee hee! Oooo... I like the new stuff you added in. 8) Especially that look over his shoulder. I think that really portrayed Draco's indecision. 8)

And don't worry about size, dearie. Good things come in little packages too. >;) *plays with little package*

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charlotteschaos May 1 2005, 08:29:21 UTC
*moans at her little package being played with* Hehehe It's weird to see my pussy displayed so wantonly by a stranger ;)

Hehe I'm glad you liked that. He needed one last, longing look, I think. Particularly to see Harry's glittering eyes. I didn't want him to miss that ;)

I wonder what the final take on how many times he tried to retreat is... He was running back intially but came back for Snape's talking (1), then he started to leave again, but Harry sidestepped Snape and grabbed him (2), he's had a trying day and is going to his room, but stops for the limerick snark (3), Harry stops him with a "Wait!" (4), he calls Potter a sap, but can't resist One. More. Look (5).

Five times he stopped. Oh yeah, Draco. You don't like him at all.

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cocohufflepuffs May 3 2005, 06:14:57 UTC
*sputters at... kitty comment* *laughs, is now decidedly in HJP mode >;) *

*giggles, imagining Draco almost crab-side-stepping down the hallway* Heh, well, Harry had a hard-time of stopping himself from stopping him. And those damn touchie-feelie/grabby hands.... ;)

*giggles evilly* Heh... grabbed Morrissey this morning for work.... found music for this! "The More You Ignore Me The Closer I Get" (Yes, that's the title, and the most of the chorus. *snork*)

Hrm.... now, is there a bow or something to unwrap that package.... >;0

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charlotteschaos May 3 2005, 06:38:29 UTC
Oooh I love Morrissey. I could definitely see Harry as a Morrissey/The Smiths boy :) Hehehehe.

So is HJP mode code for extremely horny? Shall I go into DM mode and get flustered and wriggle away coyly? ;)

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harkskar May 1 2005, 08:39:36 UTC
*rolls around in teh sweetness*

They're so in character... *ponders* *gasp* OMG, I've cracked the code - you guys are Harry and Draco!!! You're just pretending to be fanfic writers to act out your fantasies. But don't worry, I'll keep your secret safe… in return of more harrycourtdraco of course XD

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charlotteschaos May 1 2005, 08:42:09 UTC
Harry, we've been found out! Hide! *snickers*

Thank you! I'm all blushy from that compliment!

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harkskar May 1 2005, 08:51:24 UTC
You can run, but you can not hide from the fangirls, Draco dear. Even you should know that by now.

Nothing but the truth, darling :)

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charlotteschaos May 1 2005, 08:56:39 UTC
Yes, well, line starts to the left, behind Potter. Although I'm not sure he'll let you get past...

... and shouldn't you be bringing me flowers, or at least a cup of tea?

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slytherinboyz May 1 2005, 12:18:42 UTC
Oh yes, Draco's starting to warm-up to the idea - little minx he does so like to play hard to get!
I do hope they ask Snape to chaperone - just to see the look on his face:D

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charlotteschaos May 1 2005, 19:04:20 UTC
Haha Well I think at the moment, that's Draco's intent. He wants to make sure he doesn't get jumped!

Draco does like to play hard to get, because he is hard to get ;) But worth it. At least he thinks so ;)

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tartsweetheart May 1 2005, 14:19:57 UTC
This ongoing drabble-off is just so darn *cute*. I want to hug your Still-in-Denial!Draco and your Blushing!Harry. I'm very amused here.

Also, I love the appearance of Comment!Draco. I do enjoy demanding queens, as long as I am not serving them. ; )

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charlotteschaos May 1 2005, 19:07:37 UTC
Hehe aww, thanks :) That's Coco's blushing Harry, he makes me giggle. Even if he is a pervert ;)

Comment Draco just busted out of nowhere. It doesn't take much to goad him out, but then getting him to hush is another matter entirely.

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tartsweetheart May 2 2005, 06:06:40 UTC
What's wrong with being a pervert? ::looks around quizzically::

Hey, I wouldn't mind listening to him all day. But then again, I do possess the bitchy!queen love.

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charlotteschaos May 2 2005, 06:13:55 UTC
Haha well, she was tormenting him pretty well. Giving him the fear. ;)

I've yet to see the disadvantage to being a pervert, but then, I'm very biased ;)

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