Comments | propheticdream: This Ones a Long One, Read it all!!!

propheticdream

This Ones a Long One, Read it all!!!

May 05, 2005 00:15

"On That Street", by me <3 ( Read more... )

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overdose_on_me May 5 2005, 04:44:43 UTC

you have no idea how much i truely love this essay and you ofcourse!

handsome_rascal May 5 2005, 23:38:27 UTC

Mm. A few grammar things need proofreading, but otherwise, it's interesting. In the last sentence, however, the word "infatuates" doesn't make any sense (as I doubt the people were in love with the crack).

propheticdream May 9 2005, 03:09:34 UTC

Yeah, I know, theres a few things I have to edit but thats just the draft sorta, my english teacher said the same things you did

___new_slang May 9 2005, 01:37:37 UTC

I'm in love with this essay, you, my xanga, things..

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i love "classifieds" because it has sexual undertones and adam is obviously my boyfriend♥♥♥