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Vegas Native Rule #1

Jan 17, 2008 11:50

Vegas Native Rule #1
Summary: AU. When his family chooses Las Vegas as their vacation destination, Greg decides the city has nothing to offer an eighteen-year-old. Young CSI Warrick Brown sets out to change his mind.
( Love, your first love, Vegas )

greg/warrick, fanfiction, 12_fics, crime scene investigation

Comments 21

jayceepat January 22 2008, 18:03:52 UTC

I can't begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this. I'm a pretty new writer and usually write Nick/Greg but after reading this, I think I'm going to see what I can come up with.

I guess this proves what a good writer you are because you really have inspired me. Any chance of a continuation of this?

juneprota January 25 2008, 02:29:15 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope you do end up trying some Greg/Warrick. There's not enough of it out there.

I'm not really sure about a continuation of it. I was thinking of writing an epilogue, but it would probably be really short. I don't know.

ic789 January 22 2008, 21:17:55 UTC

You did a great job with the guy's characters and their life before Holly Gribbs. I love that Brass and Warrick always had a difficult relationship. Greg at 18 must have been a lot for Warrick, lots of energy, just a baby. Thanks for the story.

juneprota January 25 2008, 02:30:47 UTC

I'm glad you liked the history I threw in there. This was such a huge AU, I was trying to stuff in as much canon in as possible to make it semi-believable. Thanks for taking the time to comment!

welleg_fic January 22 2008, 22:10:36 UTC

I really love this story. Even though I tend to prefer Greg with Nick, he is a pretty versatile character and I think can be easily paired with almost anyone. Greg/Warrick definitely works.

I echo jayceepat's question - any chance of a continuation?

juneprota January 25 2008, 02:34:54 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! It's funny that you mentioned that Greg was a versatile character. I always think of Warrick that way. I can pair him with anyone - Greg, Nick, Gil, Brass, Sarah, Archie...Everyone except Catherine. Unfortunately for me, there's more W/C fic out there than any other Warrick pairing.

Um, I'm not really sure about a continuation. I was thinking about an epilogue, but it'd probably be short--

Actually, I just decided. There will be one. I don't know how long it'll take me, but there will be one.

welleg_fic January 25 2008, 05:25:17 UTC

I don't quite see the Warrick/Cath appeal myself.

Take your time on the continuation. I'm looking forward to reading it when you get it done.

gothically January 24 2008, 00:15:12 UTC

please please please let there be a sequel or reunion fic please~!

juneprota January 25 2008, 02:37:46 UTC

Haha, I think the comments may have persuaded me a bit. It'll probably be really short. I don't know how long it'll take me to write/post either, but there will be a sequel.

slasherfersure June 18 2009, 00:52:55 UTC

I read this a while ago, and it's still awesome! 8D

WHOOP, WHOOP. I love this, so hard.