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[protectorgf]

Title: Kitchen by storm
Rating: PG
Characters:  Sherlock Holmes, Dr John H Watson, Mrs Hudson, Bert, nameless other.
Summary:  How stupid do you have to be to try and rob Sherlock Holmes?
Warnings:  gen
Word Count:  700
Notes: written for a collaboration led by Capt_Facepalm found here --> capt-facepalm.livejournal.com/12363.html

Comments

[goldvermilion87]

YAY! YOU'VE FINISHED!

I Snorfled (this is the exact word for what I did) multiple times while reading. My favorite individual line, I believe was "The detective was perked with alarm, hair askew; like a very skinny disgruntled owl." It evoked a mental image that was somewehre between Holmes, Errol and Pidwigeon.

:-P

[quillwrecker]

I love the turn of phrase in this, and I love the characterization, and I love poor ol' simple Bert.... I've just named the whole thing now, and I don't care.

Cuz this is the best thing in the world! :D *pats you heartily on the back* And as such, only hyperbole can do it justice

[adidaspie]

Your writing has this constant way of amusing me. Great work here :)

[capt_facepalm]

I love what you have done with the intruder premise, and I always admire your handling of details. This is a prime example:

"The detective smirked, causing his pipe to curl upwards in the corner of his mouth"

You capture such moments perfectly, and your story is wonderful. Stupid dimwits!
Well done!

[dork_nerd]

“Only the two most dimwitted scoundrels in Christendom would try to burgle the apartments of Sherlock Holmes." Truer words were never spoken. What a great idea for a story! :)