At first I was going to use the sexy one with him biting his lip but I decided on this one cause that's how I feel and that's how he feels and fuck you do this right before we're about to rp again.You're killing me, and I swear I don't think you realize this but you are. It's exactly like you said, we do little things and the other one picks up on them, I swear I was surprised at some of the ways you wrote him because it just makes me realize they connect far more than they should. It's not right, I swear it's not, because it makes me think of how serious Kangin was about spending the night in the car just to make sure he's okay and safe. And you know, I fucking hate that he would be a stalker like that. I think Kangin wouldn't be able to let go of him, but he knows Eeteuk can't handle him so he'd just watch from the shadows and make sure he was doing okay
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dkjanakjdsa back to you!!! now forwards is backwards!
rofl. you are suck a dork. :D but it isn't my fault!!! if you read this earlier you'd have time!!! it's like when you write too, i got surprised too because yeah, they connect a lot. i wished you could listen to the song. i have it on repeat and have played it for like gazillion times.
i don't even want him to find someone else. pfft. yeah well, i think nobody else would understand this story. lmfao.
yup, like i told you over im, kangin basically just stalked him throughout those two years. and i already am writing badly D: ashdkahskd WRITE.
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i hope i don't get another attack because seriously? I'VE STOPPED WRITING. BUT THIS RP REFUSES TO LET ME STOP. UGH. and don't worry, the anniversary gift isn't angst at all. it isn't even kangteuk sorta.
ahsdjksa I told you I got no notification you had posted. D: I've had the bug bother me, but I've been able to avoid it. I've had the biggest urge to write something else, something retardedly random and family-related, and I'm holding off on that right now just because I don't know what to do. xD This though, it makes me want to write his viewpoint, only I'm still so iffy on what he's going to do and how he's going to react. Once we start rp-ing again *since I'm taking fucking forever right now* it will probably hit and I'll have to pause and write. xD
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well. it did. because your writing is amazing sweetie. i really hope you know that. ♥
but it also made me really sad because it's such a broken story and you not capitalizing anything made it that much more... real, i guess is the word i'm looking for. the first part of paragraph 4, i think, is my favorite. the emotions are so clear and the whole story really made me fall into their world. i was listening to the song as well, btw. i adore it. ♥
but ugh. i just... i want to cry. and i was half crying at the sex as well as you were because it was so painstakingly beautiful.
i don't have anything else intelligent to say. this was really amazing sweetie. really, really amazing.
i told kori i got into a panic attack because my net got cut before i had a chance to edit this fully and jsdklfjsdlf i re-read it and didn't feel a thing so i thought i ran on with sentences too long and heck i'm always starting each paragraphs with the same words!!! D:
i think though, i was crying at the sex because this was based on a heartbreaking rp and idk, it was... :/ but when i reread i doubted it would make anyone cry so. thanks a lot.
you don't need to have to say anything. your praise means a lot to me! :D
OK, I'LL SAVE MY SPOT AND COME TO EDIT....SOME TIME LATER...
oh wow, now I know why ppl say 'spot
Ok back and this is the first thing I read when I got up. Still sorta shaking from lack of sleep but it could be from the fic. I liked it lots lah! It was angst but not too angst for me to go and cry in a corner and have emo thoughts. Now I know why you had something to do with sandcastles in your PM on MSN!
Two years. Two years and his heart still beats faster when he sees Kangin's smile
Like, I'd love to quote back to you, but I honestly can't choose...this whole thing is so amazingly written, and you are Leeteuk while you're reading...
::hugs you::After writing this, I hope you realize that you are indeed a good writer, cuz it's just so gorgeous, and I'm sure everyone will agree...
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and right. i didn't bother capitalizing anything at all, or even doing proper speech quotes. :/
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At first I was going to use the sexy one with him biting his lip but I decided on this one cause that's how I feel and that's how he feels and fuck you do this right before we're about to rp again.You're killing me, and I swear I don't think you realize this but you are. It's exactly like you said, we do little things and the other one picks up on them, I swear I was surprised at some of the ways you wrote him because it just makes me realize they connect far more than they should. It's not right, I swear it's not, because it makes me think of how serious Kangin was about spending the night in the car just to make sure he's okay and safe. And you know, I fucking hate that he would be a stalker like that. I think Kangin wouldn't be able to let go of him, but he knows Eeteuk can't handle him so he'd just watch from the shadows and make sure he was doing okay ( ... )
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rofl. you are suck a dork. :D but it isn't my fault!!! if you read this earlier you'd have time!!! it's like when you write too, i got surprised too because yeah, they connect a lot. i wished you could listen to the song. i have it on repeat and have played it for like gazillion times.
i don't even want him to find someone else. pfft. yeah well, i think nobody else would understand this story. lmfao.
yup, like i told you over im, kangin basically just stalked him throughout those two years. and i already am writing badly D: ashdkahskd WRITE.
♥♥♥♥♥_________333333333
i hope i don't get another attack because seriously? I'VE STOPPED WRITING. BUT THIS RP REFUSES TO LET ME STOP. UGH. and don't worry, the anniversary gift isn't angst at all. it isn't even kangteuk sorta.
icon --> trying to cheer you up
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but it also made me really sad because it's such a broken story and you not capitalizing anything made it that much more... real, i guess is the word i'm looking for. the first part of paragraph 4, i think, is my favorite. the emotions are so clear and the whole story really made me fall into their world. i was listening to the song as well, btw. i adore it. ♥
but ugh. i just... i want to cry. and i was half crying at the sex as well as you were because it was so painstakingly beautiful.
i don't have anything else intelligent to say. this was really amazing sweetie. really, really amazing.
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i told kori i got into a panic attack because my net got cut before i had a chance to edit this fully and jsdklfjsdlf i re-read it and didn't feel a thing so i thought i ran on with sentences too long and heck i'm always starting each paragraphs with the same words!!! D:
i think though, i was crying at the sex because this was based on a heartbreaking rp and idk, it was... :/ but when i reread i doubted it would make anyone cry so. thanks a lot.
you don't need to have to say anything. your praise means a lot to me! :D
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oh wow, now I know why ppl say 'spot
Ok back and this is the first thing I read when I got up. Still sorta shaking from lack of sleep but it could be from the fic. I liked it lots lah! It was angst but not too angst for me to go and cry in a corner and have emo thoughts. Now I know why you had something to do with sandcastles in your PM on MSN!
Two years. Two years and his heart still beats faster when he sees Kangin's smile
MY favourite line ♥
Also, the song? Will probably download it later~
In case you can't tell, I loved it :)
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ahsdajksdhk why are you still using lah!!!
actually, for that sandcastles part, i totally ripped it off someone's lj. but it's a beautiful line!!
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Wow...this is absolutely amazing@!!!!!!!
Like, I'd love to quote back to you, but I honestly can't choose...this whole thing is so amazingly written, and you are Leeteuk while you're reading...
::hugs you::After writing this, I hope you realize that you are indeed a good writer, cuz it's just so gorgeous, and I'm sure everyone will agree...
I'll even use my only Leeteuk icon...hehe
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--hugs back--
i'm not sure about the good writer and gorgeous part, but if you say so~ ♥
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Angst is angst and it is so goooood, even as it is so sad. I love your writing so much~!
khjlajflkds heartwrenching.
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thanks a lot! ♥♥
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Took me long enough to remember that you switched accounts huh >.>
I was like 'where did umma go?'
....Carey had to remind me...//fail
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yeah well, you've been busy, i don't mind. :D
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