Comments | prowlingnight: Fic: In the Shadows (3/?)

prowlingnight

Fic: In the Shadows (3/?)

Oct 01, 2005 17:16

Title: In the Shadows (3 ( Read more... )

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whitedestiny1x2 October 2 2005, 14:24:21 UTC

Arggghhz! EIRhwaoeirhwlaeri! Anyway, I could have sworn I had commented on the previous chapters . . . errrr. ;_; *slaps self*

And ANYWAY, this fic is getting better and better! The interaction between Anakin and Obi-Wan makes me want to go on top of a mountain and say, "Liekomg, they are so teh CLOSE!" Oh, and this chapter really creeps me out! The whole "OMGtheshipispossessed!" thing is freaky and I'm scared something absolutely horrible will happen to the Shiznaez Team. *covers eyes*

Well, I hope you update really REALLY soon! ^^

prowlingnight October 2 2005, 18:03:54 UTC

Heh, thank you! Two comments today, and I've grinned over both of them.

So you're worried about the ship, are you? Mwahahahaha. Just wait til next chapter. *shifty look* ;)

thalia_seawood October 2 2005, 20:52:42 UTC

Lovely interaction between Anakin and Obi-Wan.

Obi-Wan is waking up Anakin in such a tender way - and then in some way he pretends he didn't do it. :-)

The next time he awoke, it was to a hand brushing tousled hair from his eyes and a familiar presence coaxing him out of the depths of sleep. He yawned and stretched lazily, spine arching, and glanced up to find Obi-Wan standing above him, his arms secreted away in his robes.

Love how Anakin brings out the humour in Obi-Wan.

And you also write a great R2D2.

prowlingnight October 2 2005, 21:47:54 UTC

Thank you! That part, with Obi-Wan waking Anakin, was my favorite moment. He indulged himself for just that second or two, then had to cover it. You know how he is. *laughs*

I think the humor is Obi-Wan's way of coping with having Anakin as a partner. It's either laugh or cry. ;)

R2-D2 is the bestest little droid ever. I love writing him.

captainquervo October 2 2005, 21:17:21 UTC

Read it again without you knowing. I'm so sneaky. Loved it.

prowlingnight October 2 2005, 21:48:46 UTC

Shouldn't you being resting your eyes?

captainquervo October 3 2005, 21:36:00 UTC

That never works. How do ya like my icon?

prowlingnight October 4 2005, 00:50:36 UTC

I think you're a little too attached to that show.

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jessex October 2 2005, 23:52:50 UTC

loving this story :)

prowlingnight October 3 2005, 01:08:18 UTC

Thank you so much! I am seriously lovin' on your Asajj icon.

avari_maethor October 27 2005, 21:43:26 UTC

Heheheh... I love Obi stepping on his foot. That's so like something he would do!

Awesome job.

prowlingnight October 28 2005, 03:24:12 UTC

Doesn't it, though? Obi-Wan certainly has a bit of mischievous playfulness about him on occasion. *laughs* Thanks for reading!

avari_maethor October 28 2005, 03:25:40 UTC

When's the next update? Or is it finished?

prowlingnight October 28 2005, 03:29:18 UTC

Good Lord, that was a quick reply! It isn't finished yet, and the next update should happen sometime in the coming week, depending upon how hard I actually plan to study for my Psych test on Wednesday. The chapter is outlined, though, so it should write itself fairly quickly once I get started.

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