bluish gray.

Nov 24, 2012 18:59

broken!kris/baekhyun, implied future kris/chanyeol
PG-13, 2,151 wc. AU.

i suggest you to listen to Block B's Movie's Over before because it's what inspires me :)

I’m still in this gray phase, but I’m not exactly gray either. )

au!others, p: kris/chanyeol, fandom: exo, c: kris, oneshot, p: kris/baekhyun, c: baekhyun, c: chanyeol

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meanie_minnie November 24 2012, 12:25:04 UTC
what is this kei. what.is.this.
we are actually krisbaek shippers in disguise, indeed.
i really love it that you used skies metaphor here. well it's because i love skies lolololol

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prpldrkrse November 24 2012, 12:34:18 UTC
what is this what?
well, because no matter what happens, the sky will be blue again.
idk i just find it appropriate.

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meanie_minnie November 24 2012, 12:41:23 UTC
that is 'finally one of us wrote krisbaek' kind of expression

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prpldrkrse November 24 2012, 12:58:36 UTC
oh i thought it was 'finally you wrote something that makes sense' one since i kinda feel that way tbh lol

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wanderlust_mr November 24 2012, 12:53:26 UTC
Ahhhh, the inevitable ending of a relationship and the optimism of a new one.
I like how mutual the break-up was, with its' bittersweet last date and simplistic goodbyes.
It left a honeyed taste in my mouth and naturally, would love to see a continuance if possible!

Also, I noticed little mistakes, grammar and sentence structure wise. Other than those though, I really enjoyed this! :)

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prpldrkrse November 24 2012, 13:01:01 UTC
i'm glad that you like it :D
continuance? might consider it if there are people asking for more :) which is unlikely but it's my inferiority speaking

...i know that there will be a lot of them! ;A; pardon my awful english grammar T_____T

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wanderlust_mr November 24 2012, 13:32:44 UTC
lol I hope people do! I'd love to know where you'd take Chanyeol/Kris as a couple and their dynamics or how they start a relationship and/or what paths Baekhyun chooses and wherever it leads.

You're far from having awful English grammar, really. :) If you have any future fics, I could be your beta if you wish.

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prpldrkrse November 24 2012, 15:35:22 UTC
i have some possibilities in mind but i don't know if i can convey them in writings :/ but let's just see later? kkk

really? *o* yes, please sobs

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indira22 November 24 2012, 19:42:03 UTC
yesweareallkrisbaekshipperindisguise!!!
i ship KrisYeol too!!
even though is broken KrisBaek,it feels more..peaceful?? because they finally broke up and all the tension is gone?
i dont know,but this is something that i can digest and your POV is fine *i'm not expert in POV things but i guess is digest-able* *me suck in explaining my self --"*
write more KrisBaek^^!

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prpldrkrse November 25 2012, 06:16:51 UTC
ah yeah i think i understand what you mean :) the break up is mutual so there's no sad thingy and such, right?
it's good that it's 'digestible' though ^^
about me writing more krisbaek, i don't know. i mean, i love krisbaek but somehow the existence of krisyeol is so overpowering. so maybe some krisyeol with krisbaek on the side? yes this is a hint

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hipployta November 24 2012, 21:38:17 UTC
It was a good breakup at least...and now Kris has hope for the future too.

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prpldrkrse November 25 2012, 06:17:13 UTC
yup yup it kinda is like that <3

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anonymous November 24 2012, 23:51:47 UTC
this made me ridiculously happy because krisbaek doesn't exist LOL OTL

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prpldrkrse November 25 2012, 06:17:36 UTC
...idontthinkigetwhatyouwannasay ;~;

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