what is this kei. what.is.this. we are actually krisbaek shippers in disguise, indeed. i really love it that you used skies metaphor here. well it's because i love skies lolololol
Ahhhh, the inevitable ending of a relationship and the optimism of a new one. I like how mutual the break-up was, with its' bittersweet last date and simplistic goodbyes. It left a honeyed taste in my mouth and naturally, would love to see a continuance if possible!
Also, I noticed little mistakes, grammar and sentence structure wise. Other than those though, I really enjoyed this! :)
lol I hope people do! I'd love to know where you'd take Chanyeol/Kris as a couple and their dynamics or how they start a relationship and/or what paths Baekhyun chooses and wherever it leads.
You're far from having awful English grammar, really. :) If you have any future fics, I could be your beta if you wish.
yesweareallkrisbaekshipperindisguise!!! i ship KrisYeol too!! even though is broken KrisBaek,it feels more..peaceful?? because they finally broke up and all the tension is gone? i dont know,but this is something that i can digest and your POV is fine *i'm not expert in POV things but i guess is digest-able* *me suck in explaining my self --"* write more KrisBaek^^!
ah yeah i think i understand what you mean :) the break up is mutual so there's no sad thingy and such, right? it's good that it's 'digestible' though ^^ about me writing more krisbaek, i don't know. i mean, i love krisbaek but somehow the existence of krisyeol is so overpowering. so maybe some krisyeol with krisbaek on the side? yes this is a hint
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we are actually krisbaek shippers in disguise, indeed.
i really love it that you used skies metaphor here. well it's because i love skies lolololol
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well, because no matter what happens, the sky will be blue again.
idk i just find it appropriate.
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I like how mutual the break-up was, with its' bittersweet last date and simplistic goodbyes.
It left a honeyed taste in my mouth and naturally, would love to see a continuance if possible!
Also, I noticed little mistakes, grammar and sentence structure wise. Other than those though, I really enjoyed this! :)
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continuance? might consider it if there are people asking for more :) which is unlikely but it's my inferiority speaking
...i know that there will be a lot of them! ;A; pardon my awful english grammar T_____T
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You're far from having awful English grammar, really. :) If you have any future fics, I could be your beta if you wish.
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really? *o* yes, please sobs
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i ship KrisYeol too!!
even though is broken KrisBaek,it feels more..peaceful?? because they finally broke up and all the tension is gone?
i dont know,but this is something that i can digest and your POV is fine *i'm not expert in POV things but i guess is digest-able* *me suck in explaining my self --"*
write more KrisBaek^^!
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it's good that it's 'digestible' though ^^
about me writing more krisbaek, i don't know. i mean, i love krisbaek but somehow the existence of krisyeol is so overpowering. so maybe some krisyeol with krisbaek on the side? yes this is a hint
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