Fic: The Visit

[leighleighla]

Trying my hand at something a little old school

Comments

[ladielazarus]

De-lovely. :) What a nice surprise for Christmas.

Your characterizations are great and, as I have a three-year-old girl asleep in my room as I write this, I can say that your Jake is spot on. :)

Thanks for sharing! :)

[leighleighla]

Thank you! It's been sitting in my fic folder for a month, so I thought I'd clean it up and post, just cause. :)

Hope you're having a Merry holiday!

[lyssie]

Oh, this is lovely. I love this sort of slice of life stuff--the look at the future for them, and that they can make it work. And a kid! I bet that freaks Pete out a lot, too.

And the mention of 'Ro, and how she and Pete have worked out their relationship.

<3 *happysigh*