Comments | ps_imcool: My day--A Series of Haikus

ps_imcool

My day--A Series of Haikus

Apr 28, 2005 16:27

Haiku-a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of three, seven, and three syllables ( Read more... )

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momo444 April 29 2005, 00:31:52 UTC

Omg..this is awesome

It's Mike pretentiousstar April 29 2005, 01:37:44 UTC

It's 5-7-5 my friend, and you should cement this friendship by friending me!

haiku:

Noun
Inflected forms: pl.haiku, also hai·kus 1. A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Re: It's Mike ps_imcool April 29 2005, 01:45:29 UTC

Done and i know its 5-7-5 but i originally 3-7-3 and i didnt want to change the whole poem so i changed the definition

bismarckpulp April 29 2005, 01:43:20 UTC

Not sure who exactly you are, but your poetry is good, but not exactly a haiku. Its actually 3 lines with 5 syllables, then 7, then 5 again. Now you have more options with more syllables. Hope to read more. Hey, maybe you should call what you wrote Petekus.

bismarckpulp April 29 2005, 01:43:49 UTC

woops someone beat me to it

yay pete! non_app87 April 29 2005, 03:13:46 UTC

im so happy that u have lj now!!! it will be so much fun to see the other side of the sparklin home...rather than only the things that happen when im there...ur like a little spy for me...haha!...ok this sounds kinda creepy...not my intent...sry...but yay for lj!

peter wicked_fiyero April 30 2005, 06:56:58 UTC

Wow everyone has a lj...haha