Help me please

[psime]

As I said before, English is not my first language. And one situation in which you do miss your language is a sex situation. To live it while it's going on and to tell it later. Here, of course

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[insatiablegirl]

YOu added me as a friend...shall I add you back? And do you want to read everything? I have naughty stuff posted too...bt you have to ask to be on that list...

[wild_sensuality]

It's very hard to explain... especially when English is such a messed up language.

The best thing I can suggest you do is read other erotica.

If I say I want to suck your penis... this is pretty dry.

I want to suck your cock. Better. More dirty.

I want to fuck you. I want to make love to you. I want to have sex. I want to shag you. My pussy is dripping, my cunt is steaming.

I am turned on, hot, aroused, my clit is throbbing, my nipples are erect.

I'm not sure how else to help you, except, once again, to encourage you to read other erotica...

But I WILL say this, I haven't seen any problems in your writing. It's hot.

First lesson

[psime]

I already took a lot from this lesson. "I want to shag you" I never heard before. But it is hard to get the tone. Say, if it was in a movie that phase would be said, which movie? which character?

And, regarding the penis, which is more commonly used amongst, let's say, two close people. It could be a couple, of course, but it could also be like two friends refering to something that happened. Like I'm telling my friend, with no intention at all to excite him, that some girl did something to my...

Re: First lesson

[wild_sensuality]

*nod*

As far as "shag" it's a British term and would be somewhat humorous used in American english. It's a common term in the "Austin Powers" movies.

"penis" or "dick" are words I think more men use between them...

"cunt" is generally a more negative term for "pussy"...

Hmm, not sure what else to tell you. *grin*

Re: First lesson

[psime]

I thought "dick" was a little bit humorous, but it probably is a foreign's perception.