Birthday Fic!

[psyche_cuore]

Title: Desire
Author: psyche_cuore
Pairing: House/Cameron
Rating: NC-17. Contains BDSM.

For houseketeer. Happy birthday, hon.

Comments

[lexie_the_pixie]

Good mother of God, I need to catch my breath and steady myself. I can't believe this is your first, it is AMAZING, what Beth said is absolutely true - with this sort of talent no one will let you stop writing, we've all become a bunch of addicts and you're our dealer ;)

[psyche_cuore]

Aw, thank you so much. I was really worried about posting it because I read everybody else's stories and am just blown away, so it's lovely that it's being received so well (although secretly I think Beth is telling everyone to be nice, lest I get upset lol).

[ex_chaosity]

OMG. YOU WANTED A NICE, LONG COMMENT, BUT I DON'T THINK I HAVE IT IN ME

[psyche_cuore]

I'm sorry, I'd like to reply to your comment but I'm still giggling at your icon. Hee.

And the psychology behind it all! lol, yes, that COULD be because of your career choice

I'm glad you mentioned that, because that was my favourite thing to write. I didn't want just emotionless smut. And yes, probably something to do with my career choice, but I've got to put that knowledge to practice somehow, right? Here seemed like a good choice.

I love how Cameron had to fight her snuggly, post-orgasm emotions. and how House EXPECTED her to be clingy! I really, really loved that little detail. It makes all the difference.

Thanks! I really wanted there to be aftercare, and he's so good at reading people he'd have to know her reaction to such a strong shift in their relationship.

I guess going to that club earlier in the year helped out? *smirk*

It may have provided some inspiration. ;) Though I left out the lesbian threesome invitation...

*glomps* ILU, Cathryn!! Thanks for commenting.

[phdelicious]

Guh! *thud*

You are very good at this. I would love to see this be part of a series.

[psyche_cuore]

Guh and thud are my two favourite words right now. :)

Don't tempt me with the series idea, this was hard enough to write by itself. Thanks for reading!

[psyche_cuore]

I've never seen Secretary. A fact I'm very sad about, but I can never find it in any stores/rental places.

Sequels? I had a hard enough time with this one, I don't think I could even come up with a basic plotline for a second one. Thanks for reading!

[beehc]

Whoa!!!
I read the "warning" of BDSM and already told you about my dirty little mind which is now totally overrun with joy! When I read BDSM I´m surely kind of expected feeling excited before reading your fic, but I didn`t expect what had been revealed, when I was actually reading it! I have really no idea why you had been terrified posting this because it`s absolutely great and "oh, so hot"!

After a quick overview of the rest of the club and a finalrecital of the rules

The word "rules" in this context had me already gasp out exitedly, all the suggestions that came to my mind because of this...

She surveyed the room and was immediately drawn to a scene playing out in a far corner. A man, tall and thin with a t-shirt stretched across a muscular back was tying a woman to a wooden cross.I love that she is immediately attracted to him, my immediate idea was that you make it seem or that you proofed that she is not attracted to his damage, but rather his body and the idea what he can do to her and how he acts, when you describe

[psyche_cuore]

The word "rules" in this context had me already gasp out exitedly, all the suggestions that came to my mind because of this..

I didn't even think of that, lol. It was just a way to connect the paragraphs. Good catch.

I love that she is immediately attracted to him, my immediate idea was that you make it seem or that you proofed that she is not attracted to his damage, but rather his body and the idea what he can do to her and how he acts, when you describe furthermore what she sees watching him without knowing that he indeed is House.

I'm in awe of you right now for picking all this stuff up! (especially when most of it wasn't intentionally placed in there, but we won't tell anyone that okay lol -maybe that was a little bit though)

While reading this you left me throbbing, too, by imagining Camerons imagination here!

That's what I like to hear!

I had to break off reading, seriously break off reading, because it was way to much, in an indescribable good way! BEST COMMENT EVER. I love that it created such a strong reaction, it

[beehc]

It was just a way to connect the paragraphs.

LOL, see how gifted you`re...!

I love that it created such a strong reaction, it tells me I did something right when writing it.

Oh, that`s an understatement, you really did everything absolutely right!

You didn`t comment my beg to keep on writing so I will try again: Please keep on writing! ;-) *hugs back*

[psyche_cuore]

You're so sweet, thank you. I'll see what I can do about writing more. Are you interested in a sequel to this story or a separate fic?

[sharp2799]

*speechless*

[psyche_cuore]

lol Good speechless?

[sharp2799]

*nods emphatically*