Encantado

[psychokatal]

Title: Encantado

Fandom: DBSK
Pairing: YunhoxJaeJoong
Length: Oneshot |WC:  4812
Rating: NC-17
Genre: fantasy, mystery, creatures, angst, sm**
Beta: girldevil

Summary: The cave of Beracha is a sacred place for the people of the Bujok tribe, entering prohibited. What will happen when one day the hunter Yunho following a melodious, entrancing voice echoing

Comments

[abcdefghiluvyou]

das ende kam so plötzlich *_*
ich wwar ganz schön erschrocken als Jae
so wütend war...für nen moment dachte ich
das ganze schlägt in ne dunkle traurige richtung
um. bin grad immernoch nicht sicher obs ein
glückliches ende nimmt, immerhin zieht Jaejoong
YUnho mit sich in das dunkle meer....kann yunho denn
unter wasser atmen? XD waaaah.
jaejoong ist schwanger? what? XD

[psychokatal]

...what.the.heck. du bist auch Deutsch- das ist die Überraschung des Tages lol
Ich hab deinen Nickname schon sooft gesehen aber das niiieeee vermutet =3

Und du hast deinen Sprachvorteil natürlich sofort ausgenutzt :P

Zu deinen Fragen: Ja, ich wollte es auch plötzlich kommen lassen. Und offen ^^
Deiner Fantasie sind natürlich kein Grenzen gesetzt ^_~

Aber: Ich habe mir natürlich schon gedacht, dass Yunho irgendwie... überlebt. Laut wiki entführen immerhin Encantados ihre Opfer tagtäglich nach Encante :P

[abcdefghiluvyou]

hallo~~ :DDDD
dabei bin ich so inaktiv in letzter zeit.

okay für mich überlebt yunho jetzt einfach weil ich
jaejoong nicht als single-mom in meinem kopf rumspuken
haben will :'DDD

[abcdefghiluvyou]

kipf lol. ich bin so durch. /15st am hausarbeit schreiben

[kattan69]

With such teasing comments, my thought is Jae ended up being pregnant which explains the 10 months absence. And why Jae is angry about Yunho being a quack is that may be all the previous quacks only want to have sex with Jae as he has fulfill their deepest desires....and thinking Yunho is only interested in that. This is my theory.

[jaeho_forever]

wow....sort of a cliff hanger that you have left us...
so what is jaejoong and is yunho dead???
please continue this story..so many questions still are left unanswered..
cant wait for your next update (if have...)

[psychokatal]

I maybe will continue this universe some day but currently I don't have the muse for it.

I always intended to end it with JJ pulling YH under water and let it stand like that, so that the reader him/herself can imagine and believe whatever happened.
It caught me by suprise that I even put in the argueing but eventually that was nesseccary, otherwise JJ would have been OOC.

The wiki page helps with the question whether or not they are dead ^_~

[tanya_h24]

the ending reminded me of pirates and the carribean 4 somehow. you know, when the mermaid took her lover with her deep under the sea? xD

in that 10 months jae disappeared, hmmm maybe because he thought yunho's feelings for him wasn't that serious? ^^;

thanks for sharing this! gonna mem it <3

[psychokatal]

haha, you are right, didn't think about =3
But I also haven't seen the movie in a while, so...

Thanks for thinking this worthy enough to mem it ~♡

[jaerin17]

Beautiful and simply enchanting like what the title said! Yunho has really fallen, and deeply if I may add. Who won't? We're talking about Jaejoong in here, haha!

Uhmm... Jaejoong was furious during those 10 months because Yunho told him that he is going to be a quack. And quacks celibates so Jaejoong thought that Yunho doesn't really want to be with him?