Comments | psychrolute: opus my modus operandi is amalgram

psychrolute

opus my modus operandi is amalgram

Jul 05, 2009 22:11

Whooo so I am so juiced to have finally finished this ( Read more... )

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wrongly_amused July 6 2009, 07:01:00 UTC

Normally I tend to breeze over a lot of the fiction on my flist, but this one caught my eye because of the summary. I'm glad I gave it a read though because this is excellent. It's light-hearted without being saccharine or insignificant - it captures the heart of the show's spirit and the characters in it. Fuu and Jin are perfect, and I love how the tale is spun around the busybody tendencies of the town around them. I'll be interested to see where you go with this. :)

psychrolute July 7 2009, 06:26:04 UTC

Wow thank you! :] I'm glad it did. I've been reading so many novels where the narration is written around the people around the main characters, I really wanted to give it a try.

knarpulous July 6 2009, 12:24:52 UTC

Ooh, wow. I haven't read a SC fic for awhile, but this caught my eye also. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter. :)

psychrolute July 7 2009, 06:22:10 UTC

Thank you :]
& I really enjoy Jin in your icon haha

downjune July 6 2009, 12:48:05 UTC

WOOONDERFUL!

downjune July 6 2009, 12:49:48 UTC

aha. didn't mean to hit enter.

Anyway, I am so excited to see some tasty new SC fic!! You have a great sense of the characters -- good narrative voice. I love the opening paragraphs -- they remind me of Manzo the Saw's narration (at least I think that was his name) Yay!

psychrolute July 7 2009, 06:15:21 UTC

haha thanks! I actually found & started reading through one of your multi-chapter fics as I was procrastinating finishing this off, I really loved the way you portrayed the characters and your style is really fresh, so I'm glad you dug this.

skinnieminnie27 July 6 2009, 16:27:28 UTC

loved it, the narration is awesome, the characters aren't ooc, good job :)

psychrolute July 7 2009, 06:13:57 UTC

Thanks!

luincalen July 6 2009, 18:20:26 UTC

This is great. The characterization is excellent... it's just where I imagine Fuu to be in the future. I also like the little reference to sentimentality - I like that bit in the anime. I'm interested to read some more when it comes...

psychrolute July 7 2009, 06:20:10 UTC

Thanks! Yeah I love Jin's little aside to Mugen in that scene...and yeah, despite getting kidnapped all the time Fuu's such a strong character, I wanted that to show up in how she's grown up.