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Why? Part 17

Sep 15, 2015 01:08

Michael trades a look with Jenny. “Emma, we don’t know that. It could just be…”

“He does Michael! He knows!” Panic in her face as she glares at him.

Jenny frowns at him... Not helping! Can’t you see she’s upset? ..and moves to sit on the edge of the bed. She reaches for the fingers on Emma’s hand that’s in a cast, hoping to calm her. “Emma… ( Read more... )

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partoetorno September 15 2015, 08:14:38 UTC

Somehow I am happy that Michael and Jenny can work togheter to help Emma... the situation seems very dangerous and very problematic...

Still, how did Rico discover where Emma was?

have we to fear Michael or to trust hime?

I hope that Jenny can be wise and smart and that she will be able to help Emma out of this terrible mess.....

:)
Thanks for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!

-“Michael please…I don’t want you getting hurt because of me”
Another twinge to Jenny’s heart.

“I’d rather you weren’t involved either” Emma cuts her off. She knows the woman’s a cop , but it bothers her that Jenny could get hurt.
The brunette’s taken aback at the caring tone and meaningful look of the blonde.

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I have a theory anonymous September 15 2015, 14:43:39 UTC

about who Michael really is... If my theory is correct, then Jenny has nothing to worry about!

mxc

Re: I have a theory ptcruz September 15 2015, 15:30:57 UTC

Would LOVE to hear what your theory is! ;)

Re: I have a theory anonymous September 19 2015, 17:22:55 UTC

Just because he's a Heisig doesn't mean he's not a blood relative. I think he is Emma's brother. Ok, now that I've written it instead of just thinking it, it doesn't sound as convincing...

mxc

I really enjoy this story. cbwicchic September 15 2015, 17:14:49 UTC

You are a great story teller. If this were a book, I would curl up with it on a rainy or cold day under a blanket and not leave until I've finished it and I'd be in Heaven. Oh yeah, my theory about Michael is he is family. He is Emma's blood relative. Didn't he say "Mueller's don't run"? He is a Mueller as well.

Re: I really enjoy this story. ptcruz September 15 2015, 20:01:59 UTC

That's a really, really great compliment! Thank you so much!
Ahhh...but if his name is Heisig?

lazerbug2006 September 16 2015, 00:19:36 UTC

I hope they all can work together to figure something out to put a stop to Ronnie! Awesome update, I can't wait for more :)

sophiecussen September 22 2015, 15:34:10 UTC

Hmm, now I'm pondering about Michael. Are they possibly blood relatives or secret lovers with the same name? "Besides…Muellers don’t run”. Or is it possible just my intepretation of that line. Muellers that are protected don't run? Curious and curiouser..!
Great chapter though. I might have to start calling you Miss Marple! :-)