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Jun 13, 2007 10:04

Since i'm at work, bored, and everything is going swimmingly well at the moment, here's a short story that I wrote a while ago that at least some of you have seen.

I had a hangover.

The words had ingrained themselves in my thought process, bouncing back and forth off the walls of my skull like a game of squash played by 2 gorillas in a brass ( Read more... )

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thundastruck June 13 2007, 09:18:18 UTC
YEAH RIGHT!
Could you bring me back a present of some sort, pretty please? Like...I dunno...their weather? Not that I'm really high-maintenance or anything.
Ah hell, just come back in one piece, for the love of crimeny.

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ptizzle June 13 2007, 09:57:12 UTC
The weather isn't great up there apparently right now, so it wouldn't be of much worth.

As long as my unfounded fear of planes doesn't manifest itself physically then I should be right.

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anonymous June 13 2007, 09:55:33 UTC
Overwritten, melodramatic, and too many try-hard references and similies.

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ptizzle June 13 2007, 09:56:23 UTC
COME FORTH YE VENOMOUS MINION, BY THE ICY HAND OF KROM I SHALL STRIKE YOU DOWN.

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ptizzle June 13 2007, 09:58:00 UTC
Jesus christ there are a lot of similes and metaphors in there.

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