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pucks09

Phantom (3A/3)

Jul 02, 2010 22:36

Title: Phantom (3A/3)
Rating: PG
Length: 3,500
Summary: Ghosts and phantoms past and present.
Note: One more short section after this.

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Comments 7

seelyfey July 3 2010, 05:54:14 UTC

OMG. Now you're just toying with me! (jumps up and down) More Faberry please!

mjacton July 3 2010, 20:02:07 UTC

Will they find each other???

I've enjoyed this so far. Can't wait for the conclusion (because I want to see what happens).

Just a tip, though, your verb tenses are kind of inconsistent.

pucks09 July 3 2010, 20:08:19 UTC

Yeah I know. I wrote this in 10 minute bursts while I was moving. Trying to finish up with this train of thought before moving on to something bigger and better.

mjacton July 3 2010, 20:59:58 UTC

Okay. It wasn't too much of a distraction. It was still great!

Also, why does real life have to get in the way all the time???

sometimescathy July 7 2010, 03:08:35 UTC

I'm so glad I found this. But holy cow, what a sneaky tease you are! They were this close to meeting each other, seriously. Great story bro

jacketweather July 8 2010, 07:10:17 UTC

"I always wondered if masquerade is related to kool-aid. Maybe cousins.”

Killing me with this story. Just has such a romantic feel with the near misses.

bladeddarkness October 7 2010, 20:19:47 UTC

I'm loving this. All the characters are just so awesome and well-written.