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Apr 30, 2008 17:05


Title: Although This Night
Rating: uhm R for now
Pairing: frerard
Disclaimer: dont kill me for the theme and i dont own them
Summary: the angel of mercy tore his wings tonight/ broke the mirror and ate the glass/ no he wouldnt give me the gun this time/ no one knows the angel of mercy walked from hell tonight.

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eveseventy6 May 1 2008, 12:57:15 UTC
i have to say that i am a bit lost... but still intrigued
i'm sure things will come together
LY ♥ xxx

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pul_the_triger May 1 2008, 12:59:55 UTC
:D thanks... i hoped to keep it that way... but i did leave enough clues right??? -big bright eyes- i didnt want to give TOO much away.. next chapter we'll see why these things are happening

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eveseventy6 May 1 2008, 13:28:09 UTC
yeah this chapter def gave some clues and i thought
perhaps that that was your intention for us to still feel a bit 'eh?'
i am very curious to see where you take it :]

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pul_the_triger May 1 2008, 13:33:22 UTC
hehehe -i know something you dont know grin- i really bet its a major turn in setting for the story next chapter for the readers... im writing it like right now :D

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but6682 May 1 2008, 15:28:38 UTC
Yay! I can't wait for more!!!

I do enjoy this a lot, but alas I'm lost too

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pul_the_triger May 1 2008, 15:32:16 UTC
:D dont worry, things will clear up in the next chapter

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xmydarkestdaysx May 1 2008, 16:54:38 UTC
so i'm kinda confused as to whats going on...are these all different pov's? and i think the begining confused me the most.
i'm hoping future chapters will clear things up..?

<3 xxx

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pul_the_triger May 1 2008, 16:59:44 UTC
sorry >_< i forgot to put in italics for flashback and ----- mean switching scenes (not really povs)

i left enough clues to who the angel of mercy is though so hes not Gee, and this chap its several event happening at the same time.

promise the next chapter will be clearer. thanks for pointing it out love

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xmydarkestdaysx May 1 2008, 19:34:10 UTC
it's okay hun, thanks for clearing it up a bit ^-^
yeah, i could tell it wasnt Gee, in fact i didnt picture it being Gee when i first started reading.
alright, cant wait to read it

<3 xxx

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blueautopsy May 1 2008, 17:08:57 UTC
oooh so mysterious.
i just need to know more :D
excited for the next chapter my love
xxxx

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pul_the_triger May 1 2008, 17:15:22 UTC
:D thank you. im really worried im confusing too much the hell out of people ^_^;

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jealousmess May 1 2008, 21:22:21 UTC
Ohh. I'm hooked!!
I wanna know what's gonna happen !!
Can't wait till moree<3

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pul_the_triger May 2 2008, 02:28:08 UTC
thank you :D im glad, hehe expect it very soon.

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