If Only to Wake 1/1

May 05, 2008 22:53

 Title: If Only to Wake
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if only to wake, oneshot

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blueautopsy May 5 2008, 16:17:10 UTC
wow sweetie, that was so sad.
this bit...
"Of course i love her, she is the one i open my eyes to, just not the one i open them for."

actually tore a giant hole in my heart.
love you xxxx

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pul_the_triger May 6 2008, 01:36:57 UTC
*hugs* im glad you liked it. i kinda felt that line was out of place when i read it over. *gives you a gee plushie* ne, feel better.

thanks for the review sugar, lots of love :D

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popheart May 5 2008, 18:57:43 UTC
Ofcourse i love her, she is the one i open my eyes to, just not the one i open them for.

Thats the line that killed my good mood! Lmao!!!!

Amazing

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pul_the_triger May 6 2008, 01:37:31 UTC
*gives frank plushie to make it better* thank you dear :D

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eveseventy6 May 5 2008, 19:19:49 UTC
this has some serious impact on one's heart my dear
i love EVERYTHING about this
the smoking at the train station, the train, the gravel road
the swirling concepts of them all in his dreams
like the whole other world that he longs to LIVE in, not just visit
and that line... yes that line is fucking amazing
'Of course i love her, she is the one i open my eyes to, just not the one i open them for.'
it says so much
AMAZING. added to memories for sure ♥ xxxxx

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pul_the_triger May 6 2008, 01:38:42 UTC
thank you dear :D it took alot out of me to write

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eveseventy6 May 8 2008, 02:06:36 UTC
just read this again. it's amazing how more stands out with re-reading
the first time was very sad and there was a lot of longing
but this time it was contentment and peace that he'd be with his love forever now
idk maybe it's just i'm in a diff mood this time round
but i think it's interesting the different facets that caught the light this time
hmmm 'facets' seems to be my word for you bb XD
anyway just rambling a bit... <3

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jealousmess May 5 2008, 22:25:25 UTC
Fucking wonderful!
and lovely and amazing and just <3
Loved everything about it!!
And I agree with everyone that commented before me:
Of course i love her, she is the one i open my eyes to, just not the one i open them for.
That line is just amazing <3

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pul_the_triger May 6 2008, 01:39:30 UTC
thank you :D lots of love dear <3

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a_bella_muerte May 6 2008, 09:38:40 UTC
This was adorably sweet.
Gerard's character is beautiful.
This was deep, man.

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pul_the_triger May 6 2008, 10:47:19 UTC
thank you, it took alot out of me to write :D

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