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pumpkin_bread August 9 2010, 06:31:45 UTC
I loved receiving your comments. Thank you so much for being so supportive!

I'm planning shorter fics based on this story. Look out for them. :)

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tsukix August 9 2010, 06:18:03 UTC
You will never know how much I enjoyed reading this fanfic. I am totally in love with your writing that it's made me cry twice for this single fanfic. I loved the complication and the angst and the realism in which they had to face these kinds of problems and not run away.

I sincerely wish for a squeal, if only a little epilogue.

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pumpkin_bread August 9 2010, 06:29:59 UTC
Thank you so much for this. It really makes me feel good that this fic touched someone in that way and writing this was a joy for me, really. I'm not planning a full length sequel because I really wouldn't know how to stretch it without an emotional center to run on, but I do want to write shorter companion pieces to it. Stories about different points in their lives, their children growing up, stuff like that. I have a lot of ideas. How does that sound?

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tsukix August 9 2010, 06:52:52 UTC
That sounds just perfect! Like drabbles of their life and their children. Maybe a future-fic where Emily is a teenager and Eames is still being the overprotective father who'd wave his glock around in front of James as a warning, lol, I can totally see that. OR anything else you want to write about.

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sunlight_dust August 9 2010, 08:43:06 UTC
This whole story was absolutely lovely.

The way you represented Arthur and Eames' relationship was so perfect and believable.

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pumpkin_bread August 9 2010, 19:57:55 UTC
Thank you. :)

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enjoyelsilence August 9 2010, 18:22:03 UTC
Ok, this was bloody brilliant. Your characterization killed me, I can't stress it enough.

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pumpkin_bread August 9 2010, 19:59:40 UTC
Thank you.

Characterization was the hardest part, to be honest, next to writing the thing itself. I think I'm comfortable with the way I understand the characters now, and I think I will keep writing in this fandom.

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quasikool August 10 2010, 05:47:35 UTC
This fic is amazing. I mean, I just... UGH. It's FABULOUS. It's just so mature and beautiful and... *sniffles*

And oh, the part were Arthur starts to cry in this part -- MY HEART. And Emily/James = my new OTP. And your portrayal of Arthur and Cobb's friendship was so sweet. And Dan is officially my fanon first name for Eames. It totally fits him. And they picked new totems! OH MY. And then there were those sweet, sensual moments as well - I think this is my favorite Arthur/Eames fic yet, no lies. Them working out there issues was just so real and raw. You know what? I'm just gonna stop now.

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pumpkin_bread August 10 2010, 06:58:39 UTC
That's too big of a compliment, considering the amount of fanfiction this fandom gets and how good it all seems to be. I'm really glad you like it so much.

Yes, I think Emily/James is my OC OTP now too. I can't help it. Not gonna lie, they'll probably get married. But then again, what do I know? I'm only the writer.

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