FIC: Say It Right [Eames/Arthur kid!fic/marriage!fic] Part 6/6

[pumpkin_bread]

Comments

[orion_nightbane]

Lovely story, really loved the resolution of Arthur and Eames' argument. :)

just my two cents, but it'll be great if you could link the fic chapters together or tag them, would make it much easier to find the other chapters. :)

[pumpkin_bread]

Do you mean tag them in my own journal or at the eames_arthur comm? I thought about tagging them in the comm but wasn't sure what everyone else was doing.

[pumpkin_bread]

nevermind, I'll link the chapters within the fic. Thanks for the suggestion. :)

[orion_nightbane]

um... np. :) i just meant in journal, just so you know. :)

[shoppermania]

awwww yay ♥♥♥
I love the idea of Emily/James lol
Beautiful story! Loved the way you developed it over the different parts

[mop_cat]

Somewhere along the line, Arthur is crying with a hand on his forehead and his elbow on the table, gesturing with his free hand as he tries to explain feelings he didn’t know he had, feelings he had ignored, thoughts and suspicions he had fully intended on keeping to himself, insecurities he has always denied.

I could see this picture so bloody clearly. If I were any form of an artist, I'd have drawn it the moment I'd read it.
This entire story is beautiful, it's very - outrageously - real. Little Emily and James, and ideas of a baby brother and Arthur and Eames. Oh boys.

I hope you write a sequel at some point Now, it you will. Pretty please? and this is defiantly going in my memories!

[pumpkin_bread]

Thanks so much for your comment. :) I wrote this story right at the end of my summer vacation, so I didn't have time to write any sequels or companion pieces. With college underway I definitely don't have time, but my hope is to be back to writing fanfiction during winter break or..even next semester, depending on whether or not I take writing workshop again then.

In other words: SO BUSY OMG NO TIME TO FIC.

Keep a look out for any new fic though, because you never know. <3

[mop_cat]

;_____; NO TIME FOR FIC? I KNOW YOUR PAIN AND SHALL BE WAITING WITH BATED BREATH. <3<3

On the other hand, I just re-read this and A;SL/DJBKD;S/LKAMKN Brilliant and I love you. It was even better the second time 'round. :D

[beanarie]

...Wow. You do an amazing amazing job of depicting the downside of marriage between two independent, adventurous people. It made me so sad when Arthur felt ashamed during his talk with Cobb because even after years together, he still wasn't supposed to admit that he gives a shit. Of course someone like him is going to have a hard time committing to someone. And oh my Gosh, the fight. A lesser writer would have considered everything solved after what happened the night before.

Thank you for sharing. This is totally getting bookmarked, so I can fall in love with it all over again some time in the future.

[pumpkin_bread]

Thanks. I thought the fight was necessary as well because nothing is resolved so easily. I'm glad you enjoyed that. :)

[crimson_adder]

I didn't comment earlier, for which I am appalled, but I love this story, and just recced it on eames-arthur for the kids!theme. :D the emotions are absolutely gorgeous, as are the relationships.

[pumpkin_bread]

Thanks!! My fics never get recced for anything so this was a real surprise, but a happy one. =)