Nobody Said It Was Easy

May 03, 2010 00:34

Title: Nobody Said It Was Easy
Disclaimer: Not real, not in the slightest.
Pairing: Kradam
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5,466
Notes: Okay, so I've not written anything fanfiction based in quite a while and this is an attempt to get writing again. I don't like the ending so I apologise for that but hey, hopefully something's better than nothing :). Oh, and ( Read more... )

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crybaby4u May 3 2010, 03:27:25 UTC
I think it was good, the ending was a perfect ending to the angst. Thanks for sharing.

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pumpkinriver May 3 2010, 22:50:32 UTC
Thanks hun. It got a little melodramatic there so I'm glad you thought the happy ending worked :)

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adamluvr36_fic May 3 2010, 05:15:30 UTC
Yep...lots of angst, but a sweet ending. I like it when Kris takes control too. ;D Enjoyed this! <333

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pumpkinriver May 3 2010, 22:51:13 UTC
Loads of angst, I felt like Douglas Sirk for a bit there :D. And I think everyone likes it when Kris takes control ;D

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adamgrrrl May 3 2010, 05:26:15 UTC
this is just exquisite. perfection.
the elevator scene was like a film inside my head. when kris ran off it to his apartment still crying, i wanted to go make him tea and cuddle him, and i am TOTES an adamgrrrl!!
alli's scene was pretty great too. glad she felt so strongly on the sitch.

sequel w makeup sex??? *bats eyes beggingly*

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pumpkinriver May 3 2010, 22:54:49 UTC
Awww bb thank you! I kept alternating between wanting to cuddle Adam and slap some sense into him in this! Oh, and I'm glad you liked Allie it, I was a little afraid I'd made her a little abrupt! :D

As for sequel...well...I wrote one piece of porn, and I mean proper no plot whatsoever porn, on one of the kink memes and felt so bloody strange doing it that I doubt it but batting eyes will definitely get the idea considered. I'm really just pretty damn rubbish at writing sex to be honest. Now, if someone else were to want to take up the sequel that would be completely different ;)

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ceci_09 May 3 2010, 05:52:25 UTC
I loved this! I love how it was angsty, but yet it had a happy ending,which I loved!.

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pumpkinriver May 3 2010, 22:56:07 UTC
Thank you! It did roll around in the angst like a pig in mud for a while there didn't it! Really glad you liked the ending :)

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prohibiton_sign May 3 2010, 06:12:39 UTC
Loved it! Brads comment about tools and doormats really had me cracking up LOL I could so picture him saying just that!

And thank you for the happy ending! I'm such a romantic, I love them the most :)

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pumpkinriver May 3 2010, 22:58:40 UTC
Awww thank you. And is it wrong for me to say that that line was probably one of my favourites to write?

And you have to go with the romantic side sometimes don't you! :D

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