And, then YOU fell asleep...

Mar 07, 2010 23:09

Every once in a while I let my hair down and paint mushy pictures. ;) Last year I was on a mush spree around the valentine's day because of several writing contests. But, this year with the incentives missing, I gave the mush season a miss too.

To those, whom I might shock with the mush that is going to sweep this post, you can read some of the ( Read more... )

late v-day entry, watch while sleeping, you, love, mush

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ext_187697 March 7 2010, 19:46:52 UTC
hi there,
after ages:) jus one word for the write up -> Beautiful:)
i really like the fact that you are just as good with ur poetry as your writing:)
"It comforts me to know that I can comfort you." too good.
VDay has become synonymous with romantic love, but there are so many other kinds of love that goes unaccounted for. Personally i really dont buy into all the hype around VDay, my friends say its jus my xcuse as i dont have tht "spcl some1" in my life, but i honestly feel dat u cannot celebrate love only for a day, its as repulsive as friendship day. i mean c'mon these are things dat shud be part of ur life everyday.
okie enough of me ranting:P do be more regular:)) hopin ur exams are far off, fill dat void with regular posts:P
take care
ciao

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pun_princess March 9 2010, 02:44:41 UTC
Hiya TD,
After ages, I know!! Thank You for being so generous with the praise. :)
Yeah, I love the line you picked out too. I am sure love as an emotion is analogous to white light which could be broken into a rainbow of colours, that is, a number of emotions. You are absolutely right about the VDay issue, but well, when you are in love these are little excuses to be stupid. ;)

So shall you be too, I mean stupid in love, I'll ask when you have that special someone in your life. :P

Certainly, more posts coming.
TC, you too

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anonymous March 8 2010, 06:40:36 UTC
Awesome post. Awesome narrative of love. If this wud have been for some real guy then i guess he wud have really been very lucky. Beautiful description of night time and falling asleep thing. Though I am wondering why similar scenes from the day time are missing. Is it just your fascination with the night or something else? And I can sense a similar fascination with voices and conversations etc as well. The poem is really touchy. And I love the way 'You' assumes importance in this post and then turns into an innocent child...no doubt because of the ministrations of love.
"That probably, only I can give all your childhood dreams back" Too good!! I think we agree that the not so gentle pushes ultimately ended in your best ever post so far. Hoping to read more.

AG

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pun_princess March 9 2010, 02:39:53 UTC
I am sure there is a real guy too. :) Night is my private space in time, the day is shared, as I have written elsewhere in this blog before. If you haven't already, you might want to read the post - hopeless romantic, will tell ya more about my fascination with night and other things.

I am glad you liked the post and thanks for coming out of the shadows to leave the first comment. :)

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parwana March 8 2010, 08:26:32 UTC
bhaat a bay 2 express :) hats off!

my favorite line - I want him to splash colourful tales on me;

read the old doggie one too.

I liked the beggar story more because of its surprise element ... :)

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parwana March 8 2010, 10:18:53 UTC
thanks for sharing the song jao pakhi under "current music"
listened it in loop ... awesome :)

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pun_princess March 9 2010, 02:49:04 UTC
:) Do check the video too, its from a Bangla movie - Antaheen. I am sure you'll enjoy the song even more.

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parwana March 9 2010, 03:29:08 UTC
I enjoyed the movie itself. ;)

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iamawiseguy March 21 2010, 16:12:07 UTC
hi

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