It's, such a sad poem.*bursts out crying*YEAH RIGHT! Man i can't see the passion, and wheres the rhyming meter? a a b b c q x l, nice measure. You are definately up there with kipling and poe. Maybe, some kindergarteners will like it. Or should i say, mAyBe SoMe KiNdErGaRtEnErS wIlL lIkE iT *sorry, i feel like being a jerk at the moment*
You khnow what, i took me 3 hours to do that you asshole. and there is rythem and if you had a heart or a soul, you would understand what I am feeling right now!
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