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[X] Tilt, ch.4
Apr 30, 2006 23:10
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meyrevived
May 1 2006, 06:35:58 UTC
They're going to Kyoto! Oh fun and joy!
Subaru said he'll have to clear the car with Hinoto? you mean spiritually? How so?
'Gone to Canada' *snickers*
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puppe
May 1 2006, 16:26:10 UTC
Clear the idea of a trip with her. Was it vague?
Anything that could be made better...? Thanks!
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meyrevived
May 1 2006, 16:32:22 UTC
Ah, notify Hinoto that they're going to Kyoto? Yeah, you can make it a bit more obvious.
Are you going to write about their conversation with Hinoto? Cause that'd be very interesting and would add a depth to the fic.
Something that could be made better? Maybe Subaru being a bit more big brotherly and trying to convince Kamui not to go more?
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Subaru said he'll have to clear the car with Hinoto? you mean spiritually? How so?
'Gone to Canada' *snickers*
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Anything that could be made better...? Thanks!
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Are you going to write about their conversation with Hinoto? Cause that'd be very interesting and would add a depth to the fic.
Something that could be made better? Maybe Subaru being a bit more big brotherly and trying to convince Kamui not to go more?
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