Different Types of Lonliness (1/1)

[puppets_corpse]

Title: Different Types of Lonliness
Author: Reila
Band: alice nine.
Pairings: none; mentioned Shou x Hiroto, though.
Rating: PG
Summary: He was too wrapped up in the constant image of the two, constantly haunted by Hiroto's bright and happy smile or Shou's fond looks. It made him sick with how fucking loving they were to one another.
Comments: H'

Comments

[jrock_life]

aww... first comment... wowo...

i liked the writing style. i have felt like that many a times..

::hugs saga hugging tora:: (hug sandwich)

it was so .... not necissarily adorable... nor sad... mixed i like that.

[puppets_corpse]

Uwaa~! I'm glad you liked it. I really don't know what possessed me in writing this, but I couldn't get the thought of Tora and Saga becoming sad over Hiroto and Shou getting together.

I've felt like that plenty of times; it was kind of hard to write because I know how he feels.

Thank you for the comment!

[anselik]

Wow, this is powerful. I have felt this way before but I did not have aid like Tora did with Saga comforting him. This is good.

[puppets_corpse]

Powerful~? I've never been told that before. I've been in the same situation as you; I didn't have anyone to comfort me like Tora has with Saga, that's why I wanted Saga to be there for him. Kind of the whole "The pain can be shared; I want the strength to be able to do that" kind of thing. White Prayer~ ♥

I'm glad you liked it.

[checkered_lips]

aww that was soo sad ;-; i really like how you described saga :D
@_@ too bad its a oneshot... ;-;

[puppets_corpse]

I'm glad~!

I think I may continue it, though. xD

[frozenstream]

this was so sad ;___;
I've done the same thing as Tora did for a couple of times..
this actually awoke some of those feelings that I felt then^^"
*wants to hide*
ah, but I loved this<3 *wants to hug Tora*

[kaichou_x]

damn, i forgot this was a oneshot. this is so tense. tora's mood. its so upseting.
You'll only feel worse if you focus on the 'what-ifs' and the 'maybes.'
i love that line.!