When the Stars Burn Out

[puppy_shipper]

Title: When the Stars Burn Out
Rating: PG13
Summary: He had wished to break her, but in the end he ended up breaking himself.
Pairing: Rodolphus Lestrange/Hermione Granger
Comments: Written for the hp_literotica challenge. I choose Rodolphus/Hermione because the only way I can see them having a relationship is when she is captured as a prisoner,

Comments

[mystifiedqueen]

Oh! This was great! I've been in the mood for reading fanfiction lately, but I didn't know where to look to find some good ones, so I'm glad I read this. =] The dialogue was great, and it was fun to read. I have to say I've never read Rodolphus/Hermione before, but now I've opened my eyes up to it. :] Good job with it.

♥

[puppy_shipper]

Oh thank you very much! I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. I was beginning to think that nobody was going to give it a chance because of the pairing. :] I'm glad that you did! Thanks for your comment!!!

[alexi_lupin]

I liked that. =D Go Hermione.

Just a couple of mistakes;

Tell me, do you still hear the screams of the innocent people that you've tortured over the pass few years?

Should be 'past few years'.

I am in no further use of you.”

Should be 'I am of no further use to you.'

You've been tortured, beaten, raped in yet

Should be 'raped, and yet'.

Not really mistakes, just typos, or little things missed while proof-reading.

=D

[puppy_shipper]

Thank you!

:D

I hate those little typos that you miss while proof-reading. *grumbles* Thanks for correcting that for me!

[kethlenda]

I was actually smiling through most of the first section--mostly because I loved the idea of Hermione being a prisoner and yet still snarking at the Death Eaters. Then it becomes heartbreaking, especially with the little detail about Hermione's eyes.

[puppy_shipper]

Thank you! Yes, I can kind of see Hermione as the type to be strong willed even when she's a prisoner, and still snarking at the Death Eaters. I had a lot of fun writing this although the end was heartbreaking for me to write.