Heechul/Hyukjae (Donghae, Hyukjae) fic

Sep 05, 2008 20:40

title: learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss
Heechul/Hyukjae (Donghae, Hyukjae)
humor, angst, romance, fluff
NC-17
late late late birthday!fic for shieldkitten. I HOPE YOU LIKE THIS. IT KILLED ME DEAD. IT'S NOT AT ALL LIKE WHAT YOU WANTED. BUT I GOT THE PAIRING RIGHT. ALSO, PORN. (akjsdlkajdslj ;_; never again.)

'We've been at this for hours, non-stop -- why won't you stop? -- and I can't remember what it was like to sleep. I can't feel my left side. This is the end and you've killed me.' )

!fandom: suju

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shieldkitten September 6 2008, 01:56:34 UTC
YES!

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unmyeong September 6 2008, 02:04:53 UTC
sodifnsodif WHERE DID YOU GO. DDDDD:

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cynicalxcharm September 6 2008, 02:23:35 UTC
My eyes must have skipped over the pairing at the beginning, and all I saw was Eunhyuk and Donghae, and OMG I was so surprised when the Heechul thing happened and homg, no one should ever put pairings at the top, because it's so much better when it's a surprise.

That was so well-written, and I loved it.

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meiface September 6 2008, 02:24:12 UTC
LASKJDFLSD YOU'RE RIGHT. IT'S EPIC. 10000+ WORDS.

I will be back. ♥

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meiface September 6 2008, 14:29:03 UTC
Goddamn, you, this is amazing. I'm so glad to see you write longfic! I have to confess that I still don't see the pairing, but if anyone can make me like it, you can. Mostly I spent the entire fic biased over Donghae. So biased. :'(

I really liked the HyukHae BFFery here though, and the way Hyuk used to like Hae and the way it hurts a little, and the way Hae is all-perceptive despite being crazy and weird. I love Eeteuk being all mothery and leadery and "...oh god, I don't want to know" and Sungmin being an excellent friend and co-conspirator. :D

I SEE NINJA!KIHAE BECAUSE I CAN. Don't judge me! :|

I adored vulnerable!awkward!Heechul. :( And Hyukkie being afraid of him at first and then happy to be with him and awww ♥.

Also you wrote smut. aslkfjls FOR CINHYUK. Of all the pairings. XD

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beauty0fparting September 6 2008, 02:45:15 UTC
*scrolls down the page* O.O are you writing a novel or something???? hehehehehe... i'll read this later... will definitely be back... ^^

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