it sounds like an interesting project. For your artist's statement though, (and this is from a purely objective standpoint), it's a little preachy/grade 7 essay. It's something that we've all heard before. Try to use your words to reflect the maturity that i'm sure your project exhibits. (This just sounds really forced, even though I know that youre an incredible writer when youre not trying. Pretend it's not for a project, but for yourself, or your journal) i dont know if this helps, but i know that whenever i do my artist statements i wind up just ripping out a page from my journal and using that, because its the most honest. good luck!
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thanx for the advice
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