I LOVED IT! Okay, first things first, Elena and her foster family! and her foster dad! I really loved how you wrote him, how he cared only about money, and how he was cruel with her. 2nd, WHAT IS THIS GIRL!? ELIJAH/ELENA. I'm totally ELEJAH NOW OKAY? They are so perfect and beautiful together, i guess he brings the best in her! Loved it really, probably the favorite thing about this chapter is their relationship. 3rd, her struggle with not knowing her parents is really painful. and how she and Elijah always picturized their families!Gaaaah that was my favorite part, too! and the ending? how you wrote those sarcastic three men? I liked it too. And p.s. i love that you're writing from her point of view.
Only minor tiny tiny mistakes like forgetting "a" in "hear" but that's nothing.
LOVED IT. I'm waiting for her to meet her father and Damon, and if you're gonna continue please DEVELOP ELEJAH MORE, OKAY?
AWWWWWWH, DANIEL! THIS REVIEW JUST MADR MY DAY SERIOUSLY! Well she isn't goung to stay very long in that foster family anymore I suppose but her past will definitely come up a lot in this story. ELEJAH? You didn't love them before and now you do? CAN I SERIOUSLY HUG YOU RIGHT NOW?! I love writing their friendship, it's wonderful one to write - definitely loved writing their parts but my favorite to write was the beginning though.. don't know why. ;) Yeah the problem with her birth parents will become a big issue in the next chapters. I see I totally got you with the Elijah/Elena parts, I'm glad you like them so much because they really are fun to write. Their bond is really great! Haha, the sarcastic men? I seriously had my struggles with them...
I'll develop them more, promise - he's a really big part of her life and always will be but they are just friends, well best friends. Ooh! The next chapter will be online by the end of the week! Hope you'll read it! And again - THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! <3
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3rd, her struggle with not knowing her parents is really painful.
and how she and Elijah always picturized their families!Gaaaah that was my favorite part, too! and the ending? how you wrote those sarcastic three men? I liked it too.
And p.s. i love that you're writing from her point of view.
Only minor tiny tiny mistakes like forgetting "a" in "hear" but that's nothing.
LOVED IT. I'm waiting for her to meet her father and Damon, and if you're gonna continue please DEVELOP ELEJAH MORE, OKAY?
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Well she isn't goung to stay very long in that foster family anymore I suppose but her past will definitely come up a lot in this story. ELEJAH? You didn't love them before and now you do? CAN I SERIOUSLY HUG YOU RIGHT NOW?! I love writing their friendship, it's wonderful one to write - definitely loved writing their parts but my favorite to write was the beginning though.. don't know why. ;)
Yeah the problem with her birth parents will become a big issue in the next chapters.
I see I totally got you with the Elijah/Elena parts, I'm glad you like them so much because they really are fun to write. Their bond is really great! Haha, the sarcastic men? I seriously had my struggles with them...
I'll develop them more, promise - he's a really big part of her life and always will be but they are just friends, well best friends. Ooh! The next chapter will be online by the end of the week! Hope you'll read it! And again - THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! <3
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waiting for the upcoming ones ;)
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