okay...that was just way beyond awesome....you've got the talent to paint a picture with words...WOW IS ALL i CAN SAY..i MEAN THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE THE CHARACTERS MAKES THEM COME ALIVE....I want to read more....I'm think I'm already addicted to this...great job..keep the good work..can't wait for the next entry...
P.S. I just have one question the heading says its chapter1 and then you write "here's chapter2" I'm a bit confused about that!!
WHAT THE HELL IS THAT GIRL!? ITS PERFECT! 1st of all: I LOVE your description of surroundings and the emotional feelings Elena has and how you write in detail about their moves and everything, Its just perfect. Its amazing. 2nd of all: GIRL YOU GOT ME HOOKED ON ELEJAH AND NO REGRETS!!! THIS LINE KILLED ME WITH FEELINGS: That was the reason why he was the best friend that I could ever have wished for. His concern for me was endless. Sometimes it seemed like he was the only one who had ever actually cared about me 3rd of all: Caroline? CUTENESS OVERWHLEMED! You write all of them professionally, meaning in THEIR CHARACTERS. I mean i just can't imagine another acts and dialogues from them, awesome job here as well. 4th: DAMON FUCKING SALVATORE IS EPIC! I loved "very much" at the end! Very Damon-ish.
All in all its really great, I'm getting hooked and that's what matters in a fanfiction. and I LOVE YOU FOR ELEJAH OKAY? if you ever kill him, I'll be mad! Haha.
Your writing skills are WOW. I hope i don't jinx you xD
*JAW DROPS BECAUSE OF YOUR AWESOMENESS* I did expect anything but this! I'm grinning like some idiot right now.. and believe that grinning is scary. CAN I SERIOUSLY LOVE YOU? NO? YES? I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU SAY ANYWAY BECAUSE I ALREADY DO.
Awh, I love how I got you with Elejah! You really seem to love them and I'm glad I'm the one who changed your opinion about them. That makes me so proud of myself, haha. You're serious? That's a compliment of the highest orders, dude. You make me blush here, okay? This... You're awesome.
I got you hooked. *dances around* And I won't kill Elijah, I promise... well I don't want to kill atm but who knows maybe I will change my idea... Haha.
Thank you so much, Daniel. Seriously, you don't know how much this means to me - even you reading this as a SE fan, I mean.. THANK YOU. This is more than I ever expected.
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P.S. I just have one question the heading says its chapter1 and then you write "here's chapter2" I'm a bit confused about that!!
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Yeah, I changed it. It's just because the first one was the Prologue and I counted it as a chapter too so I said chapter 2.
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1st of all: I LOVE your description of surroundings and the emotional feelings Elena has and how you write in detail about their moves and everything, Its just perfect. Its amazing.
2nd of all: GIRL YOU GOT ME HOOKED ON ELEJAH AND NO REGRETS!!! THIS LINE KILLED ME WITH FEELINGS: That was the reason why he was the best friend that I could ever have wished for. His concern for me was endless. Sometimes it seemed like he was the only one who had ever actually cared about me
3rd of all: Caroline? CUTENESS OVERWHLEMED!
You write all of them professionally, meaning in THEIR CHARACTERS. I mean i just can't imagine another acts and dialogues from them, awesome job here as well.
4th: DAMON FUCKING SALVATORE IS EPIC! I loved "very much" at the end! Very Damon-ish.
All in all its really great, I'm getting hooked and that's what matters in a fanfiction. and I LOVE YOU FOR ELEJAH OKAY? if you ever kill him, I'll be mad! Haha.
Your writing skills are WOW. I hope i don't jinx you xD
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Awh, I love how I got you with Elejah! You really seem to love them and I'm glad I'm the one who changed your opinion about them. That makes me so proud of myself, haha.
You're serious? That's a compliment of the highest orders, dude. You make me blush here, okay? This... You're awesome.
I got you hooked. *dances around* And I won't kill Elijah, I promise... well I don't want to kill atm but who knows maybe I will change my idea... Haha.
Thank you so much, Daniel. Seriously, you don't know how much this means to me - even you reading this as a SE fan, I mean.. THANK YOU. This is more than I ever expected.
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