Yes, *DEAD* cause it was soooo fucking beautiful! Damon's POV? IT WAS TOTALLY IN THE CONTEXT OF HIS CHARACTER! YOU PORTRAYED HIM SO WELL. AND OHMYFLYINGFUCKSINTHESKY I LOVE DELENA!!!!!!!! OKAY? THEY ARE SO AWESOME AND COOL. AND SHE'S BITCHY AND HE'S SNARKY, YET THEY ARE FILLED WITH LOVE AND EMOTIONS. AND THAT KISSING CAR PART? #MEGUSTA. I Was about to turn on, well, its not right to turn on from their first kiss, so I'll savor it untill they have their SEX! YES SEX! IM WAITING FOR THAT. The dialogue is so funny and real and close to their characters.
Your writing, probably you're one of my favorites, cause you get so deep into details. Not stupid details, but the important ones! OHMYLORD, Im ranting like mofo here. Anyway, THE CHAPTER IS REALLY GOOD, LOVED IT TO PIECES, AND THAT LAST SCENE? MEGUSTA! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. HOPEFULLY LOTS OF SEX AND LOVE AND OH GOD.
P.s. It's the only time i forgive you for not putting ELijah.
ALL IN ALL? 10/10 Amazing work. Can't wait for the upcoming part.
that was AWESOME AWESOME...i'm not a very huge fan of the vampire diaries neither have I read the books, but you Laura have made the story so much better, absolutely loved the plot, dialogues, and descriptions....I got lost in the story while reading...wow is all I can say.....I never thought of Damon like that, but now I think i'm in love with the character of Damon, you make him so irresistible and Elena well she's just beautiful. I love how you describe her eyes. I hate long descriptions but yours just add awesomeness to story...
P.S. you need to make just one correction...on the whole it was flawless. "but something inside of me old me I'd see her again" you forgot the t in told...I know i'm being a total ass by pointing out that small mistake...sorry
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Yes, *DEAD* cause it was soooo fucking beautiful!
Damon's POV? IT WAS TOTALLY IN THE CONTEXT OF HIS CHARACTER! YOU PORTRAYED HIM SO WELL. AND OHMYFLYINGFUCKSINTHESKY I LOVE DELENA!!!!!!!! OKAY? THEY ARE SO AWESOME AND COOL. AND SHE'S BITCHY AND HE'S SNARKY, YET THEY ARE FILLED WITH LOVE AND EMOTIONS. AND THAT KISSING CAR PART? #MEGUSTA. I Was about to turn on, well, its not right to turn on from their first kiss, so I'll savor it untill they have their SEX! YES SEX! IM WAITING FOR THAT. The dialogue is so funny and real and close to their characters.
Your writing, probably you're one of my favorites, cause you get so deep into details. Not stupid details, but the important ones! OHMYLORD, Im ranting like mofo here.
Anyway, THE CHAPTER IS REALLY GOOD, LOVED IT TO PIECES, AND THAT LAST SCENE? MEGUSTA! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. HOPEFULLY LOTS OF SEX AND LOVE AND OH GOD.
P.s. It's the only time i forgive you for not putting ELijah.
ALL IN ALL? 10/10 Amazing work. Can't wait for the upcoming part.
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ONE OF YOUR FAVORITES? I'm officially dead. It was nice to meet you, Daniel. Will miss you and your pretty ass while I rot in hell. Bye.
LOTS OF SEX? Who knows.. he might get lucky. ;)
You forgive me? Pheww. I was already scared.
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!<3
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