Returning (Chapter 11)

Sep 20, 2007 13:05

Title: Returning (Chapter 11)
Author: Purerose
Fandom: NCIS
Prompt: 019 Lost
Character/Pairing: Kate/Gibbs
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1116
Summary: Gibbs is late home.
Authors Notes/Disclaimer: Still don't own NCIS... maybe for Christmas... Also, thanks for all the comments, I really love coming on here first thing in the morning and seeing what you ( Read more... )

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aruna7 September 20 2007, 12:32:18 UTC
Okay now I'm eating the keyboard cause you stressed me all the way through this chapter!!!! I want the next one!!!! You won't kill Gibbs, will you????? You can't do it? You'll keep him in one piece please??? *bats eyelashes* Can't waiiiiiiiit for next chapter!!!!!!

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purerose September 20 2007, 13:58:36 UTC
I'm sorry for any damage to your keyboard! Hopefully the next chapter'll be up on Saturday or Sunday. I made a couple of changes to this chapter which kind of have a domino effect on the other chapters, so I have to fix the next chapter so that it makes sense.

:D

But thanks for letting me know that you're liking it :D

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aruna7 September 20 2007, 14:06:43 UTC
*taps fingers* *winks* I think I can wait till the weekend. And I prefer waiting a few more days if it means having a non rushed written chapter *hugs* I really adore this fic!!!!!!

You're going to have me bugging you on every chapter I'm afraid!!! *hugs*

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purerose September 20 2007, 15:21:49 UTC
At least having someone bugging me keeps me on target.

My main issue is that I decided to be slightly nicer to Gibbs, I've changed what's happened to him, which means I have to *ugh* do research.

Maybe when I'm all finished I'll post the chapters that never were. I've saved lots of my false starts and I've been wondering about sharing them at some point. Then you'd know some of the other evils that I had been planning.

But anyway, you can bug me as much as you like, it's always good to have someone to chat to. :)

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ditte3 September 21 2007, 17:37:15 UTC
Hurry please.I like your story very much.

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purerose September 21 2007, 18:40:44 UTC
Thanks for letting me know that you're enjoying it. :)

Just have to make a couple of edits to chapter 12, hopefully I'll be able to post it later tomorrow afternoon :D

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ditte3 September 22 2007, 06:31:42 UTC
Thank you.

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purerose September 22 2007, 12:21:03 UTC
Hey,

I've just posted the next chapter. I'm looking forward to hearing what you think of it. It's actually taken me about four attempts to get it the way I want it. For some reason I kept on switching to first person at random points during it!

:D

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dani101 September 23 2007, 15:17:00 UTC
I want to hug Rebel-I have a dog and I know that they are like children-they are feeling bad,when they are not loved.:)Another great chapter!)

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purerose September 23 2007, 18:38:12 UTC
Heh, thanks. I'm glad you like Rebel, he's totally based on my pooch, Patch.

I just wrote a chapter which will either be number 13 or 14 which has a lot of Rebel and the girls in it, I felt like I have been neglecting him. :D

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