scanning the floor for victims.

[puresurreal]

the sense of emptiness
the feeling of being dead.

the truth showing who you are
the fear clouding your head.

she looks like the flowers
she feels like the wind.

he sees the beauty
and feels forgotten.

Comments

[katcatpsc]

wow, andy! did you write that??? that is very well written... powerful, rhymes that flow naturally and aren't forced... makes me wonder what inspired it... hmmm...

[puresurreal]

ya i wrote that. thanx. it was just one of those nights and i just sat down and wrote it.