Men, men, men.

Mar 01, 2009 22:07

Men.
Pairing: Yoosu
Rating: G
A/N: I'm really terribly lazy. I do apologise to readers of my other Yoosu. I'll finish the next chapter tomorrow. Something short to tide me over for the night.

His laugh is the sun. )

fandom:dbsk, pairing:yoochun/junsu, rating:g

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purpaidhliska_x March 1 2009, 22:34:29 UTC
HOW CAN YOU NOT FAVOUR YOOSU. D:
THEY'RE SO REALLLL.

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sidmaron March 1 2009, 23:47:13 UTC
Gaaaaaaaaaaaah!
That was so........ *__________*
Wonderful, amazing, cool and ... uber short! xD
I need more...
Maybe some more shortness? ;P
Pweeeeeez! *beggs on her knees*

*giggles*

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purpaidhliska_x March 2 2009, 07:16:44 UTC
But I'm writing Aux Champs Elysées.
*pouts*
Maybe.
Just a one piece following.
:D

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sidmaron March 2 2009, 09:45:29 UTC
*glomps*
I read it again. And I definitely want more! Keke~

*smooches* <3

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mfnx7mk2 March 2 2009, 00:20:35 UTC
This was really lovely, i liked the "men are not beautiful" "men might be beautiful" "men are beautiful" parts also i think you might want to have a look at fixing this part:

"thread his through the hair just above his left ear."

Really enjoyed this! short and sweet :)

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purpaidhliska_x March 2 2009, 07:17:49 UTC
Oops, thought I'd fixed that. :|
Fixed nowww. :D
Thank you for reading!
And pointing out my mistakes!

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femmephantom March 2 2009, 02:24:29 UTC
I love this story. :D I feel all warm and fuzzy, now.

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purpaidhliska_x March 2 2009, 07:18:21 UTC
Haha!
Merci :D

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micah88 March 2 2009, 02:37:28 UTC
'fix that staring problem'!!! lol! i love this line...along with the progressing of 'are not' to 'might be' to 'are'.
your writing style is awesome!
thanks for writing!

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purpaidhliska_x March 2 2009, 07:18:59 UTC
Similarly, thank you for reading!
:D

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