Men. Pairing: Yoosu Rating: G A/N: I'm really terribly lazy. I do apologise to readers of my other Yoosu. I'll finish the next chapter tomorrow. Something short to tide me over for the night.
Gaaaaaaaaaaaah! That was so........ *__________* Wonderful, amazing, cool and ... uber short! xD I need more... Maybe some more shortness? ;P Pweeeeeez! *beggs on her knees*
This was really lovely, i liked the "men are not beautiful" "men might be beautiful" "men are beautiful" parts also i think you might want to have a look at fixing this part:
"thread his through the hair just above his left ear."
'fix that staring problem'!!! lol! i love this line...along with the progressing of 'are not' to 'might be' to 'are'. your writing style is awesome! thanks for writing!
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THEY'RE SO REALLLL.
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That was so........ *__________*
Wonderful, amazing, cool and ... uber short! xD
I need more...
Maybe some more shortness? ;P
Pweeeeeez! *beggs on her knees*
*giggles*
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*pouts*
Maybe.
Just a one piece following.
:D
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I read it again. And I definitely want more! Keke~
*smooches* <3
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"thread his through the hair just above his left ear."
Really enjoyed this! short and sweet :)
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Fixed nowww. :D
Thank you for reading!
And pointing out my mistakes!
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Merci :D
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your writing style is awesome!
thanks for writing!
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:D
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