The sad thing is that it's grammatically and structurally sound. ._. It's just that the characters are such bloody Sues it's fffffffffffft WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVEN. I couldn't even get halfway through the thing.
You mean, that this entry will cause more people to actually want to read it? :P Doubtful; most of the people who read my LJ tend to be of the critical, good writers type, so if anything one of them would review it rather than ... y'know, hail it.
Actually I was hoping the proper emotion from you would be an epic review-format grilling. XD
D= They must have enabled some security shit on their 'artworks'. Bugger.
Basically it's one of those fics where the characters act like total assholes, but make out the canon characters (in this case Lance) to be the asshole, while they're the cool, awesome victims who still weasel their way out of being prosecuted. Literally: the two characters, one of whom was a gym leader, got taken for property damage and harassment and a bunch of other stuff, and not only were they getting annoyed at him for ripping them a new one and acting as though he was the one with the stick up his ass, their lawyer was yelling at Lance for them getting sued. And then they still ended up getting out of it somehow (didn't actually read that far; just skimmed the last paragraph as I went down to look at the author's note).
AND THAT WOULD BE WHY. XD I'm usually logged-in 24/7 and with the mature content filter disabled, so I forget these things exist.
And yes, it is. Like I said, I didn't read all of it, but judging by what I did read and the AN, most of the swearing is probably there 'because it's R-rated, dur-hur'.
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Ooh, an Orre fic... with Lance? Wait... why is he swearing? What? WHY?
ARRGH WHAT DSHFJHWDFGYUFBVJCBXSCHBFEIUHFIE
DA = not a good place for fanfics. -_-
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The sad thing is that it's grammatically and structurally sound. ._. It's just that the characters are such bloody Sues it's fffffffffffft WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVEN. I couldn't even get halfway through the thing.
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And I fear I actually just found something even worse on DA. Just.... >_<
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Also I forgot to reply to your DA comment before. XD I don't usually read fanfics on DA, TBH, but they come up when I do a search for Lance artwork.
And I'm not sure I want to know, but considering the awful scary picture I found on the same day I discovered this fic ... D=
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In all seriousness, isn't there chance that linking to this and decrying it will just cause more interest?
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Actually, I can't read it because I don't have a DA account, but did I do the proper emotion? :D
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D= They must have enabled some security shit on their 'artworks'. Bugger.
Basically it's one of those fics where the characters act like total assholes, but make out the canon characters (in this case Lance) to be the asshole, while they're the cool, awesome victims who still weasel their way out of being prosecuted. Literally: the two characters, one of whom was a gym leader, got taken for property damage and harassment and a bunch of other stuff, and not only were they getting annoyed at him for ripping them a new one and acting as though he was the one with the stick up his ass, their lawyer was yelling at Lance for them getting sued. And then they still ended up getting out of it somehow (didn't actually read that far; just skimmed the last paragraph as I went down to look at the author's note).
*takes deep breath* Okay, I'm calm.
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When you have an excellent summary like that, how could I not sign up for a DA? =P I'll read it soon.
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And yes, it is. Like I said, I didn't read all of it, but judging by what I did read and the AN, most of the swearing is probably there 'because it's R-rated, dur-hur'.
Woot! \o/
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