LJ Idol 2011; topic one

Oct 21, 2011 10:02

First entry for LJ Idol! To all the non-participants on my f-list, non-contestants are allowed to vote, so head on over here to take a wander through the entries and vote for as many as you'd like. :3 Voting poll will be open when the topic deadline passes.

When you pray, move your feet. )

topic one, writing, lj idol

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shadowwolf13 October 21 2011, 05:49:39 UTC
I like the flow here, it kept moving and didn't let me stop for too long. Very nice. :)

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purple_drake October 21 2011, 11:02:00 UTC
Thanks, glad you like that. :3

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kehlen October 21 2011, 14:32:14 UTC
Wonderful.

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purple_drake October 21 2011, 23:23:56 UTC
Thank you!

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whipchick October 22 2011, 16:47:31 UTC
Love this journey, and especially the worlds we create as kids. Reminded me of summers with my cousins, being horses in the river.

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purple_drake October 22 2011, 23:11:46 UTC
The first thing I thought of with that description is that you were water-horse constructs pretending to take down Ringwraith, a la the Lord of the Rings. :D Man, I miss childhood. Glad you enjoyed!

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muchtooarrogant October 22 2011, 19:02:43 UTC
I liked this, especially the gradual progression we see in your main character. So many different playgrounds with different companions, the changing games which are played, and even a transition from true to virtual movement. Nicely done!

Dan

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purple_drake October 22 2011, 23:14:22 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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rt_sparrow October 23 2011, 02:40:27 UTC
Conflict. People who don’t agree, characters who don’t get along, lines being blurred between what’s real and what isn’t. I feel too much-feel rage and sadness on behalf of people who aren’t real, panic over events that happen only in the world in our heads. I can’t step away. What if I miss something in the story? I don’t want to leave. Sometimes I don’t want to stay.

I totally get this.

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purple_drake October 23 2011, 02:44:47 UTC
LJRP? XD

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rt_sparrow October 23 2011, 02:47:49 UTC
No, I play with a small group offline, but a thousand years ago I RP'd on AOhelL.

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purple_drake October 23 2011, 02:52:43 UTC
Ohh, yes, I've heard of the AOL groups; I think I only came into the scene after they were popular. Roleplay, eh? Can't live with it, can't live without it.

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