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purple_drake

LJ Idol 2011; topic one

Oct 21, 2011 10:02

First entry for LJ Idol! To all the non-participants on my f-list, non-contestants are allowed to vote, so head on over here to take a wander through the entries and vote for as many as you'd like. :3 Voting poll will be open when the topic deadline passes.

( When you pray, move your feet. )

topic one, writing, lj idol

Comments 48

blythe025 October 26 2011, 17:07:36 UTC

Great story!

"remember the mangos" -- I love that. The writing throughout is very visual and quite wonderful.

purple_drake October 27 2011, 23:16:58 UTC

Thanks! Mangos are a very memorable fruit, I'll have you know. ;)

blythe025 October 27 2011, 23:27:06 UTC

Yeah, they are!

basric October 27 2011, 00:11:38 UTC

Excellent writing. Nice prodding of your readers emotions. Well done.

purple_drake October 27 2011, 23:19:08 UTC

Thanks, glad you thought so!

pixiebelle October 27 2011, 03:19:14 UTC

I love the way you told this. Great story!

purple_drake October 27 2011, 23:23:03 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

roina_arwen October 27 2011, 03:56:17 UTC

Very inventive, I like the way you laid it out.

purple_drake October 27 2011, 23:42:48 UTC

Thanks; I have a bit of a thing for lyrical turn of phrase. XD

alycewilson October 27 2011, 08:13:46 UTC

So many of us have similar stories. Thanks for sharing yours.

purple_drake October 27 2011, 23:43:09 UTC

Thank you for reading it. :3