LJ Idol 2011; topic two.

[purple_drake]

Comments

[pixiebelle]

This was a fun read! At times, it reminded me of Dr. Suess with the rhyming and rhythm... But just hints. Maybe it's just me who thought that too :P

But I did think this was fun and certainly interesting to follow along!

[purple_drake]

Really? Thanks! Any similarity wasn't really intended; mostly it was just meant to be a tongue-in-cheek stream of consciousness kind of piece. XD Even though it wasn't entirely stream of consciousness, because I wound up editing it quite a bit.

[snarkerdoodle]

I really enjoyed this -- definitely agree that there was rhythm to it, almost musical in a sense. :)

[purple_drake]

Thank you! I do enjoy music, but I'm no good with instruments. At least it can come out somewhere. XD

[lilycobalt]

I liked your exploration of what you can do with a certain number of words.

[purple_drake]

Glad you did, and thanks. :3 Brevity is something I've always had trouble with, so it seemed appropriate.

[poppetawoppet]

I loved the use of language :D

[purple_drake]

Thanks! It was a fun exploration, but I got tired of gardens afterward. XD

[basric]

Well written.

[purple_drake]

Thank you!