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notodette November 23 2011, 03:37:27 UTC
I really liked this. The dialogue piece to the mixed to the prose. Very good snippets on the topics!

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purple_drake November 23 2011, 08:13:11 UTC
Thanks! Using different forms seemed like a nice way to spin it up a bit. :3

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lawchicky November 23 2011, 03:53:56 UTC
I like how you wrote this in parts- very clever!

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purple_drake November 23 2011, 08:14:04 UTC
Thanks! I originally intended to have them be bookended by some other stuff, but wound up taking those out so it was just the snippets.

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noodledays November 23 2011, 20:31:38 UTC
a very interesting mix of vignettes. :)

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purple_drake November 23 2011, 23:17:20 UTC
Thanks! :3

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whipchick November 23 2011, 20:47:02 UTC
Interesting moments! Nice to get a take on 'inconceivable' from different characters.

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purple_drake November 23 2011, 23:17:59 UTC
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

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nyxocity November 24 2011, 00:39:09 UTC
I like how you used several different pieces as variations on the theme!

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purple_drake November 24 2011, 02:08:15 UTC
Thanks! It's about the only thing that stayed from my initial idea. XD

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