Strength and Senses

[purple_elefants]

Title: Strength and Senses
Subject: Toby/Andy
Rating: PG
Timeframe: Post-Gaza
Author's Note: Happy Birthday soaked_in_stars! Just a little something

Comments

[soaked_in_stars]

Ahhhhhhh, I love it! I was all smiley just seeing post-Gaza on the header. The description is so niiiice, I can totally see it.

He exhaled deeply the breath that had been caught in his throat, his arms wrapped firmly around her in an embrace he could feel to his bones.
I love that. Something I rarely think about is how even Toby's breathing said something about his character (gahSchifflove) but it's true, his breaths are heavy and labored when they need to be and so this is perrrfect. Eee.

THANKYOU! :)

[purple_elefants]

You're welcome of course. :-)

(Schifflove)

[ninefish]

Ohhhhhh, so nice! I love, love, LOVE the second paragraph. "Everything else came second." For me, those few words just capture that sense of urgency in a moment so specifically.

[purple_elefants]

That second paragraph was totally an after-thought. Glad I after-thunk. ;-)