Whoops--the whole thing this time

[purple_elefants]

I just realized that I managed to not even post the entire story last night. It doesn't end that abruptly, really. *facepalm* (The last three paragraphs are what was missing.) Trying this again...

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[ninefish]

I really enjoyed this! I have a limited interest in J/D and I ususally end up skimming, but this really hooked me in, right from the beginning. There was a great flow, it was so easy to read.

Right from the first sentence: He knew he shouldn’t read it. I couldn't stop until I knew what "it" was, and then you had me hooked so I didn't want to stop. Very nice!

[ninefish]

*usually...okay, i really do know how to spell. ::reaches for more coffee::

[purple_elefants]

I can neither spell nor type. I probably wouldn't have even noticed.

I'm very pleased that you enjoyed this, especially since you're not one to glomp on to anything J/D. Thank you. I personally still am not completely happy with it, but maybe I am being too critical.

[gru_gru]

I already told you what I thought of the story....so this is probably going to be...

[gru_gru]

annyoying but you wanted....

[gru_gru]

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[gru_gru]

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