[fanfiction) - untitled 01/10/07

[purpleicicles]

Okay, second post today to make up for the general lack of stuff going on on my end recently. Wrote this today near the end of a six-hour break between lectures. took roughly 40 mins, and is seriously dark and heavy. More infor below, but you have been warned, okay? Concrit much appreciated, of course. I wanna know how you guys respond to this,

Comments

[meobnal]

That was creepy in a very good way. I love the role reversal at the end!

[purpleicicles]

It just felt kinda right in amongst all the creepy stuff... I dunno, the whole thing is weird, to be honest! But role-reversal was definitely the idea :)

[purpleicicles]

I think it's the ending that makes this weird, actually...

[purpleicicles]

Haha, glad to hear it!

[winged_sandals]

Ooh, chills. >.<

Beautifully written. The imagery is... some adjective that I can't think of. Haunting, I guess, would work. Nicely done! (I need to go drown myself in Lucky Charms now, though.)

[purpleicicles]

Hee. Yay for gory imagery! I'm thrilled you thought this was haunting - I was going for that!

Lucky Charms?

[winged_sandals]

I always have to eat sweet things after reading something sad or scary, haha. XD

[purpleicicles]

I do that sometimes!